Thanks ,Doyle,you prefect the composition of this one,and I seldom to read any bools about composition,I hope you could help my works to prefect the composition,and this pic looks better after you seized it!!
Laphael-- you have done an excellent job of capturing and portraying the emotion "longing"; your model is very persuasive in her appearance and expression. I like the gold-like straw surrounding her and the out-of-focus image in the background. Nicely done. --Regards, Jan
Oh Laphael . . . I really like this image. The expression captured and the title fit so well together. I also like the DOF and what appears to be a field and house in the distance. I would suggest, however, a closer crop on the left side because I feel it pulls the subject out of the center and makes the image even more dynamic . . . (I have attached an example for your consideration). The colors and light are wonderful. This is very nicely done!
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