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G G
{K:61359} 8/17/2006
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Great shot Hanggan. I'm agree with Hugo about the tilt and the right part of your photo..The impact would be more effective.
Good work
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 8/17/2006
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Hi, Doyle my friend,
Hmm, maybe it's because of the different angle of vertical sides of the windows? I've tried to see the original pict globally, and somehow I think the right window quite distracting. On the second thought, I guess removing it without having to tilt the picture will make it better. What do you think? :)
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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
{K:174133} 8/17/2006
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I agree with Doyle, nothing really wrong with the original post. Very nice, Hanggan!
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Dave Stacey
{K:150877} 8/17/2006
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An interesting portrait of this man alone in the train, Hanggan! Well seen and captured!
Dave.
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Jeanette Hägglund
{K:59855} 8/16/2006
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SPLENDID
jeanette
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 8/16/2006
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Interesting Hanggan . . . I looked at the interchange between you and Hugo. Personally, I like the originally posted image the best. the cropped version really feels too off balance with the man and train damage all where they are . . . where the previous posted (original) shot seems to be better balanced by having some framing left in. Anyway . . . I would likely have thought the same way but having seen the cropped version . . . I now prefer the original!
:)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 8/16/2006
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Hi Hanggan, You could try stretching the photo, but on second thought, I think the crop you attached to your reply is probably the better option. The damaged area below the window is already close to the edge of the photo, as is the top of the metal strip around the window. Stretching the photo would disrupt that.
Thanks for your reply,
Cheers,
Hugo
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 8/16/2006
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Hi Hugo,
Many thanks for your critique. I don't really understand on "excluding the right window without changing the image ratio"...how could I do that? I only crop and remove the right window...please see the attached.
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 8/16/2006
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Hi Hanggan,
Good shot, but I think a bit more effort in the postprocessing might've boosted the impact of this photo. I would remove the vertical perspective / tilt, and try to exclude the right window form the image without changing the image ratio. Other than that, I think it's a very powerful shot.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Benedetto Riba
{K:15792} 8/16/2006
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Dear Hanggan
Oohhh!!! I like so much it
Excellent colors and details.
Indonesia so beautiful.......
Regards
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abuT naruD
{K:2796} 8/16/2006
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nice work!
I like...
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Leo Régnier Я£
{K:67696} 8/16/2006
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GREAT portrait my friend, very well done!!
Leo:)
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Karina Brys
{K:16541} 8/16/2006
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An interesting face, well framed by the train window.
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