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Cleveland Smith
{K:7006} 5/20/2006
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Roland, thanks for taking the time to view and comment on my images. I will have to try the image in B&W.
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Cleveland Smith
{K:7006} 5/20/2006
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Hugo, thanks for your honest and to the point critique. Your points are wells taken, thanks again for commenting.
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Cleveland Smith
{K:7006} 5/20/2006
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Paul, thanks again. I was standing on the steps to the Science Fiction part of the museum and looked up, and this is what I saw.
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Cleveland Smith
{K:7006} 5/20/2006
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Len, thanks for taking the time to view and c omment on my images.
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Cleveland Smith
{K:7006} 5/20/2006
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Thanks Joao, you seem to be in my corner and I do appreciate your comments.
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Roland Lacson
{K:12214} 5/20/2006
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Nice abstract, I believe this would look equally good converted to b&w (Grayscale. Well captured & seen otherwise.
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 5/20/2006
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Hi Clevelant, I rather like the agressive feel of this photo, but in all fairness, I must admit that's about it. Sorry for sounding so negative, but I think it needs a it more postprocessing; The feel of this image is IMO dependant on a high level of saturation, a specific / dominant subject as well as a hard contrast, none of which are there - yet. The element of lines and shapes are there, yet it needs a bit more consistency in approach and subject. Hope you see what I mean.
The PoV and angle are good, though, as you've shown before. The red metal also increases the appeal, and I think I see your intentions. Just think there is much more potential in this photo than you present here... It's rather difficult to put my finger on the real sore spot, so to say.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 5/20/2006
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WOW! What a dramatic shot. This is an angle I've never before seen. Congrats!
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Len Webster
{K:25714} 5/19/2006
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Wow! Great 'abstract' - the best abstracts seem to be taken naturally...
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Joćo F * Photography
{K:41945} 5/19/2006
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Great work hgere dear Cleveland for me is an abstract and i love it great light and tones well done !! regards joćo
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