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Jim Gamble
{K:12164} 3/8/2006
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As I said in my previous comment, heck I just love the whole photo.
Jim Gamble
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c c
{K:13449} 3/5/2006
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Perfection!
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Trish McCoy
{K:15897} 3/5/2006
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love the darkness/shadows here. awesome!!!
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Matt Davis
{K:3935} 3/4/2006
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Pat,
Great portfolio by the way. I love shooting kids too - it's what I do for a living now and you are clearly a top shooter in that dept. This pic is pleasing but for me lacks the final punch. I shot a very similar portrait some time ago - see in my portfolio...
http://www.usefilm.com/Image.asp?ID=736006
The general comments have been that it's a great shot of the girl, but the composition doesn't work for most because of it being 50/50 rather than a 1/3 split (following some std rules of photography!). I like it though and it's good to see something similar appearing.
Your composition here has the model actually facing slightly out of frame with teh srtong leading line of the wall coming in very aggresively from the left. I maybe think it would have more harmony if the model were facing into the wall rather than her back too it. This is just my personal preference and very much based on the fact that it was how I shot my image.
It is overall a very simple bold composition but maybe I would like to see less volume pof one tone - i.e. the large amount of wall and also her top being very black.
All the best.
Matt
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Shoot Mike
{K:3255} 3/3/2006
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Nice tones, nice selective focus. The model is making nice eye contact with the camera. she is also showing lots of attitude. Very nice black and white.
Mike
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jacques brisebois
{K:73883} 3/3/2006
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very nice DOF Pat, nice model
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Sherry S
{K:2757} 3/3/2006
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Great perspecitve! I like the wall. Excellent!
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lius hanzen
{K:2844} 3/3/2006
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great potrait!
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Pablo Dylan
{K:63918} 3/3/2006
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Grande ritratto.
Complimenti.
Pablo
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pan g.
{K:16899} 3/3/2006
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So wonderfull portrait, excellent.
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Ms. Mel Brackstone
{K:5285} 3/3/2006
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Beautiful shot, beautiful lady, terrific composition, and I love the processing too, your black and white is stunning.
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Himadri Sharma
{K:1187} 3/3/2006
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great composition ... love the details and the tone s.... great portrait ... +++7
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Dina Marie
{K:-1410} 3/3/2006
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rich & moody. i love your tones. was it very overcast?
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Leo Régnier Я£
{K:67696} 3/3/2006
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Very introspective portrait, I love it!!!! Congratulations dear Pat!!!!
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