thank you marc...i agree about the poem...i edited it to take it out, as i was hesitant to put it there in the first place.
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Marc Gougenheim{K:5398} 2/26/2003
This is creative and interesting... Nevertheless, maybe it can be improved. I'd say 1st that I feel the light reflected towards the top of the glass shouldn't be there... Then I would probably like this better if the flower behind were a bit more "special", more beautiful.
But i like the colors and I like the overall effect.
Side comment: I am not sure that T.S Eliot's words are really obviously related to the image, and I would anyway try to let the image speak for itself. Regards.
hehe, the light was off. this photo was taken in my bathroom, looking at the window. there was a very minimal light outside from the setting sun and gray storm clouds and it was just enough to highlight certain aspects of the branch and leaves.
Nice still life John. I would switch off the light in the room you made the image just to see what will happen and shut again (just an opinion). All the best!
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