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gary real
{K:57} 4/1/2005
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OK, Thanks a lot for the feedback.
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Larry Monserate Piojo
{K:10780} 4/1/2005
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Yap I got it! Mas ok nga yung edited, bro! Ok ung pagka-crop mo. Mas na-focused dun sa nagd-drill as a main subject. I can say I like it better than the one here. :)
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gary real
{K:57} 3/31/2005
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Bro,
I e-mailed you a copy of the edited photo since i can't attach a photo on my posts.
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gary real
{K:57} 3/31/2005
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I'll post it tommorrow, I left the CD at home. By then, you can be the judge.
Thank you very much.
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Larry Monserate Piojo
{K:10780} 3/31/2005
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Then maybe you can post the one you have cloned with. And we'll see the difference. :)
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gary real
{K:57} 3/31/2005
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Curtis,
I seem to not understand their point of view when they say that the figure below was distracting. But what i did before was clone out the man in the foreground using photoshop and it suits them fine. But in my portfolio, i am keeping the original picture posted here.
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gary real
{K:57} 3/31/2005
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Thanks larry for the comment and advise, Actually i think of my shot as good enough, it was just that others find it not suited to their taste. I'll keep up with doing lots of this thing in the future.
Again, many thanks.
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Curtis Feather
{K:5130} 3/31/2005
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I don't understand what they are criticizing. Compositionally, I find all 3 men to be important, and especially the closer one, with the black shirt, opposite of the others. The close and then further men add a level of depth into the image and a repetition of the 3 forms. Cropping out that man would create no more than a snapshot of a guy with jackhammer. Nice work as it is.
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Larry Monserate Piojo
{K:10780} 3/31/2005
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nah! i dont think so! this shows full force! i guess it's ok. what I think should be re-done here is the contrast. I think it's too bright... the whole image. But somehow it's effective. you just try and compare. :)
keep shootin' from the heart,
LarryM.P.
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gary real
{K:57} 3/31/2005
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Thanks for the comment, although a lot of my friends in the circle critisize the butt of the other worker which they found distracting, i should have cropped the image just to show the man holding the jack hammer. What do you think?
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Curtis Feather
{K:5130} 3/31/2005
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Thanks for the comment, much appreciated. Nice capture here, documentary style feel to it. Nice record of activity.
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