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giuliano colivicchi
{K:2880} 6/11/2003
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Technically correct but lacks of originality
Regards Giuliano
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anirban chaudhuri
{K:27} 4/19/2003
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GOOD COMBINATION !!!!!
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Cemal Ekin
{K:2309} 11/19/2002
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I really like this, it blurs the boundaries between the lace and the flowers. The blend is what makes it appealing for me. Its almost duotone quality is a definite plus.
Well done.
Cemal
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Steven B. Poitinger
{K:1757} 11/13/2002
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Bev:
I think the composition is very strong. Only nit is the bluish backed lace in the right middle of the frame. My eye keeps floating there which is slightly distracting.
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Mary Sue Hayward
{K:17558} 11/13/2002
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I was lucky enough to see a larger print of this one. It is indeed very well balanced compositionally, and the texture is incredible. Toni, I always value your great feedback, but I wouldn't change a thing on this one :)
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Toni Martin
{K:5092} 11/12/2002
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Yes Bev, a large print might be the answer. I would like to also see more of that wonderful light I see behind the vase. Have you tried this in a window? It's hard to tell if that is a little bit of a window behind. It could really bring the image to life. You're always very good Bev. I just think this one needs a little more work to be equal to your other images. May I borrow your steel jeans? And you can come down a little harder on me. I would appreciate it, really!
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Petra Engle
{K:1282} 11/12/2002
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Beverly,
While I agree with Toni that the flowers all blue would maybe be nicer, I think this is a great composition. I like it a lot.
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Beverly Gustafson
{K:1572} 11/12/2002
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Thanks Toni, I always appreciate others views, it helps a person to "see" what needs seeing. This was taken with a large print in mind..which I had done. It has a totally different look at 16x20..not so busy..if that makes sense?
:-)
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Toni Martin
{K:5092} 11/12/2002
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Been thinking about this, Bev. I think the lace needs a rose.
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Toni Martin
{K:5092} 11/12/2002
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Bev, I hate saying this. I love the lace, I love the vase, and the flowers. I just think there is too much there. Just too busy. Please try 2 flowers and see what you think. And I think the flowers have to be blue to work the best. Please excuse my frankness! I'm a Sagittarian!
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