It was the beautiful light on this shot that caught my eye. The reflection adds as well. I actually like the windmills in the distance. I figured they may have some significance to you. If so they are beneficial, if not then I guess I'd have to agree with eveyone else about their not needing to be included. Maybe I'm odd but the antenae doesn't bother me too much. Adds a little geometric interest, especially with it's reflection.
As portraits go its nice but I agree that the antenna an windmills in the background are vey distracting and contradictory to your purpose. I don't think cropping will help because of the antenna being next to her head.
Guten Tag. Die farbe ist sehr gut aber ich muss auch sagen das die rote fahne nehmt ein bissen weg vom bild. Sonst ist alles in ortnung. Ich hoffe du kannst mein armes Deutsch lessen.
I like the quiet pose, and the reflection off the hood of the car. However the background is a little busy. You could lose the antennae dangling over her head, it's irritating. The windmills in the distant background are ok, they add atmosphere, and are appropriately out of focus. She has a slight squint because of the bright sunlight.