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Avi
{K:70138} 8/6/2008
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thanks Viola !!
hugs,
Avi
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Violetta Tarnowska
{K:24497} 8/6/2008
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Bravo!
Good composition and frame.
I like here grain and tones.
Warm hugs:)
Viola
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/28/2008
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Dear Hussam,
I am happy to receive your enthusiastic comment, but it really does not help me towards improving my work. Please do not misunderstand me, but I would appreciate it a lot if you write a smaller and more meaningful critique.
best regards always, my friend.
Avi
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Hussam AL_ Khoder
{K:79545} 7/28/2008
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nicee...
nicee...nicee...
nicee...nicee...nicee...
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nicee...nicee...nicee...nicee...nicee...
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Peter De Rycke
{K:41212} 7/27/2008
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Nice work !
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Mohsen Bayramnejad
{K:21377} 7/27/2008
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Outstanding...
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 7/25/2008
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At least *some* few things remain clear! ;-)
Cheers!
Nick
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/24/2008
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:):):) .. I am prone to confuse people with my thoughts and words.. because, I am super confused myself !! :):)
cheers !!!! (no confusion over THAT !!)
Avi
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 7/24/2008
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Obscure the "ghosts"... but how? Good idea in the theoretical parts of it, and just because of thos you put me into deep doubts.. Obscure ghosts, he says.. But they *are* already ghosts, so how to obscure them?
Avi, you have a very nice and a very hard property for me! You state things that are good for a puzzling beyond all trusty boundaries, you know that? There he goes and simply says "obscure the ghosts"!! ;-)
Cheers!
Nick
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gianna piano
{K:15530} 7/23/2008
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great feel...
g.
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/23/2008
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niether do I ! .. but my thinking was more to obscure the 'ghosts' .. I dunno.. :)
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 7/23/2008
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See that, see that!!! I have a similar one, Avi, but yours is much better. I think that except the general view of "rectangles in a rectangle) the grain-like look adds a good touch of "aged" appeal, which then goes hand in hand with the "ghosts of the past". Still I wonder how to make those ghosts even more noticeable.... Any clue of what could be done in addition? I ask because I think that there is much more potential in such images but I didn't find it until now. :-(
Cheers!
Nick
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Mehul Chimthankar
{K:18655} 7/22/2008
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Hi Avi,
This is excellent stuff
Mehul
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Shadi Porooshani
{K:11236} 7/20/2008
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excellent composition dear AVI
7+
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/18/2008
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Thanks Keith. This was taken at the MoMa :)
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Keith Saint
{K:13784} 7/18/2008
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Your framer must love you Avi
Well done nice collection and still plenty wall
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/18/2008
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Thanks very much, my friend !! cheers, Avi
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RC. Dany
{K:64104} 7/17/2008
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Nice work !!!!!
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Abhirup Chakrabarty
{K:792} 7/17/2008
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past=vast ocean of memories left behind/void..sheta bojhanor jonne otota negative space rakha...and the pictures=ghosts.....khub shundor story telling....and the framed pictures give me a feel as if they are crawling towards the upper part to fill up that void...as a story telling picture this is brilliant...but IMHO, negative space-ta arektu(just a little bit) kom rakhle parte...just a personal opinion.. :)
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Anindya Maity
{K:7880} 7/17/2008
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Great idea and good comp.Beautiful use of the grain,b/w and the empty space.
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Francisco N-G
{K:28728} 7/17/2008
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Very nice study dear Avi, the weight at the bottom of the layout gives a sense of stability and immutable balance; like deeply saturated wood, sinks to the bottom of the lake. The mood is old and has the spirit of relics to be discovered. Great shot my friend!!!!
Cheers!
F.
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Joggie van Staden
{K:41700} 7/17/2008
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Hi Avi, I like the atmosphere created by the open space on top, giving it a sense of timelesness. The contrast and grain further enhance the atmosphere. Very creative work!
Joggie
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Manu
{K:13082} 7/17/2008
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Excellent idea and very well spotted giving it space to breathe....
Manu
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M jalili
{K:69009} 7/17/2008
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Really I like it so much .............
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Ania Blazejewska
{K:23981} 7/17/2008
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great idea dear Avi, interesting composition and suitable title
best regards,
Ania
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Kausik Mukherjee
{K:-65} 7/17/2008
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Very interesting shot. Like the space above.
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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Thank you !! :):)
cheers !!
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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Thanks very much, Aline. Well, I usually try to think differently and avoid the cliche when I am composing a shot in my mind (or in front of me, with my eyes).. maybe that's what you see.
About the noise, I added it, to give it an old film-like effect, to go with the mood and story I am trying to tell here.
cheers,
Avi
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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ha ha ha.. thanks Stan !! cheers, Avi
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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Ni I did not Jim. On your tip, I looked it up on imdb, liked what I read, and added it on my Netflix list. Thank you very much !
best, Avi
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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jodio the top row of pictures is not in a st line, tobuo tui thik i bolechhish. ami 17mm e ektu wide niyechhilam, tate oi jinishta kheyal korini. anyway, I was more interested in the compo.
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soumya
{K:13087} 7/17/2008
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na avi da eta ekdom bhalo laglo na. no story, more towards abstractness. the vignetting at the corners is not needed. aager dutoi better chhilo etar cheye. sorry.
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Anirjoy
{K:1153} 7/17/2008
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oosaa idea!! achha chobigulor deoal e setting ta je straight line e boshano sheta slightly daandike tilt ki?
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Billy Bloggs
{K:51043} 7/17/2008
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The composition and the grain/noise appeal to me, Avi. It's another powerful image.
Regards, Gary
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Aniket Chakrabarty
{K:2730} 7/17/2008
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This one is really good. Jio mama.
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absynthius .
{K:20748} 7/17/2008
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phenomenal minimalistic work Avi,
it feels like the canvas sinking, with 'all the faces in the mirror', never willing to stop dropping- and thus giving room to a shapeless formation eternal white- eternal wash away--- ghost indeed,
brilliant work Avi,
v.
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txules .
{K:62768} 7/17/2008
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very interesting, actually love the large empty room because adds a lot of tension; distorsion, noise and softness makes a strange picture which i love it;
excellent....txules
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A N
{K:-67} 7/17/2008
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Once again, giving a short look at the recent pictures, your catch my eyes. Where does come from your smart and sharp eye ?
Just a low POV and a semi framing, and it makes all the difference.
I would like to know why you choosed noise, and if you added it on post-process. On my mind, it adds some mistery and softness to the picture, in harmony with this gallery of remembrance.
Sorry for my english.
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Stan Hill
{K:35352} 7/17/2008
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Are these your BIP or POD. It is all good at UF. thanks for all the imagination you share with us and the comments you share as well. Be well, Stan
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Moises Levy
{K:782} 7/17/2008
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Interesting in B&W, Congrats....
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Jim Loy
{K:31373} 7/17/2008
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Wonderful... have you ever seen the movie "Dead Poet's Society" ? There is a scene where the teacher makes the students look at images of long past students and whispers, "Carpe Diem..." while they take it all in... That one moment is worth watching the entire movie.
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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Yes, I realized immediately as my friend Syamantak mentioned the same (in my language).. I was having a feeling something doesn't work.. and bingo !!.. I LOVE Usefilm beacuse of these positive critiques..
cheers my friend !
Avi
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Wolf Zorrito
{K:78768} 7/17/2008
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Still room for many more pasts to come .........
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Fadel J
{K:13974} 7/17/2008
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Yes! you know I just saw the other version and wished the woman wasn't there :) and here it is, very nice one Avi!
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Syamantak Das
{K:3997} 7/17/2008
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aaaaahhh....eibar hoyechey!! :)
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Avi
{K:70138} 7/17/2008
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Sorry, had to re-load. Here are the comments it had received:
Stan Ciszek {K:25128} 7/17/2008
Outstanding shot Avi,
Very creative,nice composition,lighting and interesting idea.
Stan.
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Ivonne * {K:8234} 7/17/2008
Avi,
very interesting look, great shot...Excellent b&w tones..
I like it !
Warm hugs,
Ivi
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Syamantak Das {K:2340} 7/17/2008
ekta kothaa bolo...mohilar ki khub proyojon chhilo?..I'm just trying to understand..
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