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James Cook
{K:38068} 6/10/2007
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I see. So maybe turning the left shot 90 degrees clockwise so that its line runs up and down instead of left and right? Then they would all have a vertical linear direction. I suppose you could then put a mirror image of the left one (in vertical) on the right to frame the converging lines created by the middle two.
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Jean-Francois Garneau
{K:1898} 6/10/2007
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Thanks for your thoughtful critique James. The intent was that the diagonal, upper left to lower right, carry from shot one to shot three. That was to be the thread. I also think the converging perspective on 1 and 2 were intriguing.
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James Cook
{K:38068} 6/6/2007
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I like the idea. I think this tripartite is having some troubles. You might try flipping the left image vertically so that its darkspace will be in the upper left corner to help offset the darkspace of the right image (in the upper right corner). I think the best guy around here for making these kinds of compositions is Philip Minnis:
http://www.usefilm.com/photographer/103225.html
I try to think about each shot having a base set of lines. When combining them into a set like this, one must match up those base lines to form some coherent pattern and direction.
Hope that helps.
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Avi
{K:70138} 6/5/2007
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Very nice collage work !!!!!
Great perspective, Jean-Francois !!!
cheers! :)
Avi
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Ameed El-Ghoul
{K:42215} 6/5/2007
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I like the result allot, creative indeed,
very well done,
Regards,
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