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Arthur Kornienko
{K:9686} 7/2/2007
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Nu Valentin, Spaceba and dakuya.
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Valentin Sergiyenko
{K:411} 7/1/2007
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Hi Arthur
You are absolutely right :)
Horoshego dnya.
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Arthur Kornienko
{K:9686} 7/1/2007
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Valentin, while the overall picture is good, i.e. pose, position of hands, leaning of body, background interest, the lighting on the face is inadequate. Shooting portraits/body shots outside is always challenging and light too strong or shaded needs consideration. Also, the clothing is somewhat distracting from the face of the lady. The eye naturally looks at the designes on the shirt and writing on the pants but does not tend to be drawn to the real point of interest, the lady. I hope I'm not to critical, just trying to help. Well done, super model.
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Hussam AL_ Khoder
{K:79545} 6/4/2007
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sooo effective !!!
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MUJAHID AWAIS
{K:1703} 5/26/2007
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Excellent Plus. I love portrait photography. One of the best Portrat.
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A Vas
{K:326} 5/25/2007
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remarkable photo,
congrats,
Vass
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Valentin Sergiyenko
{K:411} 5/25/2007
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Agree concerning sepia. I tried BW and decided to use photofilter.
Thank you for visit and comment.
And yes, she's stunning ;)
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Name Surname
{K:3712} 5/25/2007
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Very relaxing composition, I'll listen the Crimson's song you had in mind to check it out...:-)), hovewer I think those near sepia tones are more appropriate than b&w.
Davide.
ah...and of course a stunning model.. :-)
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metoni .
{K:24727} 5/25/2007
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very nice portrait.
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Valentin Sergiyenko
{K:411} 5/25/2007
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Thank you, Sandor
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Valentin Sergiyenko
{K:411} 5/25/2007
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Hi Clive
I already wrote to John what was behind the scenes when i make this shot. If you remember this song you will understand me better.
But your workshop is really good - thank you.
v.
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Sandor Szollos
{K:7681} 5/25/2007
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Very good portrait,nice work!
Regards
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Clive Carter
{K:8603} 5/25/2007
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A very nice portrait, I think this young lady will be pleased with the shot.
However, I feel you should have presented this as a B&W image, IMHO it would show better contrast but would need a little tweaking in an editor.
I took the liberty of making some adjustments of my own, hope you like it.
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Tweaked in Adobe Photoshop |
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Valentin Sergiyenko
{K:411} 5/25/2007
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Thank you for comment, John. Agree, but while taking that photo i had old King Crimson song on my mind. "Letters"... Do you remember it?
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John Jackson
{K:1738} 5/25/2007
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Nice model. A little more light on the face would have been nice.
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Valentin Sergiyenko
{K:411} 5/25/2007
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Thank you, Keith
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Keith Growden
{K:29240} 5/25/2007
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Beautifull picture of a beautifull lady. Nice pose and composition. Well done. Keith
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