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sara sue
{K:2117} 1/13/2006
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hey dave thats for your time that u took writing the comment...well ya the isolation feeling was intended as it was so cloudy and about to rain so it felt like it a little bit...but am still learning hope by next time i do a better job..and btw u have a gr8 range of pics seems like u've been moving alot :)
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Dave Holland
{K:13074} 1/12/2006
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I find the composition ok, interesting even. The color shift feels too blue to me, like a lot of my old mountaineering pics. However even that adds a cold, isolated feel here -- was that intended?
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Ahmad Amin
{K:902} 1/12/2006
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very nice take sue
i like it
well done
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sara sue
{K:2117} 1/12/2006
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well Neil i really appreciate the time u took commenting on the pic and am here to learn and hope by next time i'd take a better shot :)
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Mohamed Terzaki
{K:95} 1/11/2006
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I totaly agree with Neil White.
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Neil Niamh White
{K:9165} 1/9/2006
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sara,
While the colour here makes the photo interesting in the thumbnail, I think it could have been made even better by re-thinking the composition.
Having a horizon or waterline at the half-way point tends to divide a photo in two in a way that the eye does not find comfortable. Placing the waterline at either the upper or lower third tends to improve and make a photo more attractive.
It's less than clear what you want the eye to focus on. Is it the boat or the scenery? Again - if it was the boat I would have taken the photo (or cropped it) so that the boat appeared in one of the "thirds" positions.
I've looked at your portfolio and clearly you have a good range of images so please don't take this critique as particularly negative.
Neil
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Tarek El-Molla
{K:5377} 1/9/2006
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beautiful blue shot
well done
best regards
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