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Critique By:
Olga-Eva Krajciova (K:19240)
5/4/2009 7:16:47 AM
I just love this image! Cloudes and the water surface those look like being painted and the sunshine - so strong that makes the whole image pretty warm. I love those tones, look like really calm place.
regards
Olga
(well, know where to go next time in California) :)
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Kambiz K (K:37420)
1/24/2006 7:56:18 PM
very interesting abstract with those bright patterns
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Susan Hernandez (K:6487)
12/20/2005 4:28:49 PM
I think the title is excellent for this image, the lights does look like an eye of an egyptian, I like the movement of the lights, its as though they are dancing in the air, nice work
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Nichol Rose (K:1020)
12/8/2005 2:24:49 PM
I think it is a unique piece of art
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Critique By:
David Hofmann (K:22223)
12/7/2005 11:27:14 PM
is that a self portrait? Funny! I like the little dragon on the right, you be in frame a little bigger or further. The focus is on the ears which is a little sad. Beautiful eyes.
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
12/7/2005 5:24:02 AM
very impresie ,very great capture,very best regards.
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Jeff Cartwright (K:52046)
12/5/2005 3:45:09 PM
A Boy...and His Dog!.....Excellent B&W Photograph.....Lauren!
Best Regards:
Jeff.
Thank you, Lauren!...for your Visit...and Comment!!!
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
12/3/2005 6:35:22 PM
wonderful capture,very great details and colors,very best regards...
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
lauren Cornwall (K:154)
12/2/2005 10:17:29 PM
thank you ! i will try to do some with blue skys and reflections!
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
lauren Cornwall (K:154)
12/2/2005 10:16:31 PM
thank you very much!
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Critique By:
ISMAEL MARCOS (K:10535)
12/2/2005 11:50:27 AM
congrats for this candid shot
regards from spain
ism
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Toshi (K:11924)
12/2/2005 10:12:39 AM
Nicely captured Lauren - I think this would look even better if you were able to capture the building against a blue sky (although probably difficult with the rainy weather right now). I'm sure you can get some great reflections as well with the right angle. Keep it up 
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Critique By:
Eb Mueller (K:24960)
11/29/2005 2:40:53 AM
I agree that the negative space takes over visually. It feels like the buildings are about to fall into the empty space. It is a neat effect, or is my seeing weird?
Eb
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Critique By:
Eb Mueller (K:24960)
11/29/2005 2:37:59 AM
This is great! I am inspired to try some tall buildings - if I should get to the big city (Vancouver.) I find the partially cropped sign makes me curious for more information.
Eb
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
11/29/2005 2:28:25 AM
Gran perspectiva!
Felicitaciones!
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
lauren Cornwall (K:154)
11/29/2005 1:57:44 AM
thank yo uvery much for your comments! i tried to take your advice and have posted another photo from with less empty space. Please let me know what you think! Thanks!
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
Toshi (K:11924)
11/27/2005 6:27:48 AM
Love this perspective, however for me, there's a little too much empty space. I know you can't control where the buildings are, but maybe concentrating on one or two buildings would give more impact.
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
11/27/2005 6:20:25 AM
wonderful composition from a great angel,beautiful details and contrast,very best regards my friend.
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Critique By:
Ian Miller (K:9190)
11/23/2005 6:29:09 PM
Nice shot, it's soooo sharp, I better keep my plasters handy lol. Funny, you're called Cornwall, I'm from Cornwall. It's a small world, where are you from Lauren? Thx for your comments by the way. You have a wicked Profile photo.
It's "The Dogs Bollocks".
Ian
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
lauren Cornwall (K:154)
11/22/2005 6:51:36 AM
thank-you soo much!
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Critique By:
Alex Beverstock (K:137)
11/22/2005 6:46:38 AM
Great shot! What a cheeky kid! I really love his bright eyes, Well done!
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Critique By:
lauren Cornwall (K:154)
11/20/2005 3:32:20 AM
thank you for your comments i am striving to be the best photographer that i can because it is my passion i am saving right now to buy a photoshop program for my computer so i can fix some of my photos. i welcome all your comments i love to have critiques good or bad, and most importantly helpful! i dont really understand what why this photo has started a discussion but thank you for you helpful comments. i just wanted to point out to mr. coffey that i am not a mr. cornwall but a Ms. Cornwall or as i prefer laruen. i hope to hear more thanks again!
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Critique By:
Rodney Steele (K:1841)
11/14/2005 3:23:33 AM
Lauren, your keen eye saw a wonderful moment which you quickly caught with the camera. I see a lot of tenderness. It seems the child is gently hugging the dog and there is no distress on the dog's expression. The dog's eyes are in focus and draw my attention. The scene in the kitchen adds to the sense of spontaneity. Please be encouraged to take more photos and to share them with us. Thanks, Rodney
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
11/14/2005 12:21:12 AM
Paul ... Understood ... and Harry has a good point perhaps!
Lauren ... Keep Posting ... and Welcome to USEFILM!
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Critique By:
Paul's Photos (K:35235)
11/13/2005 7:20:21 PM
Douglas, thanks for your comments... I may agree/disagree with you but I think this is a topic for the forum and not on Lauren's photo. If I upload a photo and it is selected for an award or gets a featured critique, I am not the one who selected the photo for an award. I guess the main thing is I don't want to take away from the photo that has got an award even if I may disagree with the selection. I think this is an issue to bring up to Usefilm and other members via the forum. I may agree that the critique did not actually match the photo but the critique from Ann is valuable in the larger context and I think beneficial and is worthy of the front page. The whole idea of the featured critique is to highlight a good critique of a photo. It does not mean that the photo receiving the critique is perfect or high quality.
Anyway, good discussion... I asked a question recently about the Featured Donor award in the forum as well. Ciao, and keep taking great photos.
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| Photo By: lauren Cornwall
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Critique By:
H L (K:11377)
11/13/2005 4:32:15 PM
Hi Lauren! I like the capture! Both angle a good emotion. Despite the tech criticism which I greed! I am surprise seeing those honest helpful comments. Besides Gayle?s critic was what you ask for. I feel politics and favors are the bad residues. Glad for USEFILM trying to balance this! Please keep shooting
Best regards
Harry
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Critique By:
Glen Converse (K:2000)
11/13/2005 3:38:48 PM
That is one beautiful Jack Russell Terrier
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Critique By:
Ann Nida (K:45248)
11/13/2005 12:56:21 PM
Douglas I too thought it strange that this particular critique was posted and not the one pertaining to the image itself but I don't pick them. I read somewhere in the forum pages that these featured critiques are chosen by computer. Someone else has already put forth the question about why some people are featured more than others and suggested there mau be a bug in the "Featured Critique" choosing method. The reply was something to the effect that it has something to do with being generated by a computer.
Lauren did ask me personally about about waterfalls so I gave her the information she was looking for.
Lauren asked for serious help and both Gayle and I gave it to her.....AND she appreicated it. Paul's comments are encouraging her and I personally think it was very kind of him to take the time to view and comment on her image.
It's too bad that you are quite caught up in the competitive numbers side of this site otherwise you might enjoy the site and might even make some nice friends here.
Try to have a nice day anyway.
Cheers - Ann
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Critique By:
Gayle's Eclectic Photos (K:91109)
11/13/2005 9:39:12 AM
hahahaha...i know him and this is exactly what is this person's, shall we say,preference?...tho' i thought my critique was quite instructive AND was thanked for it.....the person is having some fun ;> ....do you have something personally against me,Douglas? Perhaps sent by someone else?
hmmmmm?.......bahahahaha
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
11/13/2005 9:28:48 AM
Dear Paul,
You have always been a fine Gent as far as I have known you and once again you are here also, but I have a serious problem with this image being on the front page for these reasons:
Mr. Cornwall only has seven images uploaded with mediocre value to say the most and only 28 Karma points going towards the critique of others including his own comments, therefore does he among thousands of members deserve 'Front Page Status'?
Ann's premiered 'Featured Critique' on the front page has absolutely nothing to do with this particular image itself whatsoever but speaks of waterfalls drawing attention to her own image(s) even though by lauren's reply previously.
My concern is NOT for me at all and you must surely realize that, but for all of the thousands upon thousands of Great Photographers who have gone unnoticed and have not received proper exposure, (pun definitely intended), that this Site has perhaps driven them away forever and that is what I bemoan more than anything else.
Best of Regards Paul as always!
P.S. Mr Cornwall ... This page may end up making you famous in some sort of way, so please strive to be the best photographer that you can possibly be and if I or anyone else can provide any assistance whatsoever ... then don't ever hesitate to ask as you have, but please spend some time touring the Highest Rated Images and try to learn from them instead of me at the least!
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