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Critique By:
Mostafa Salah (K:171)
6/6/2005 3:03:30 PM
it has a lot of feelings....
great work
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Critique By:
A K (K:8499)
4/20/2005 11:32:41 PM
Very lovely. The translucent effect of the fabric looks wonderful against the sun, with the light coming through. I think the tones could be a little richer, with blacker blacks and a little more highlight to the whites, but otherwise really nice.
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Critique By:
no longer a member (K:10557)
4/12/2005 12:57:09 AM
The hair gives it a great background. Excellent job here.
Mike
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Critique By:
no longer a member (K:10557)
4/12/2005 12:55:20 AM
Interesting shot, creative and excellent composition. I like your B&Ws! 7+
Mike
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Critique By:
no longer a member (K:10557)
4/12/2005 12:53:19 AM
Great composition, very well thought out and sets a mood. Congratulations. Hope to see more of your work.
Best wishes,
Mike
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Critique By:
no longer a member (K:10557)
4/12/2005 12:51:08 AM
Excellent composition, and the lighting looks realy neat, like a dream.
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Critique By:
Roland Lacson (K:12214)
4/10/2005 2:08:24 PM
Very nice Elizabeth, even if the hair is fake the idea to utilize it to fill the frame is a creative statement itself. I also like to point out the perspective of the shot which you captured looking straight down. Keep it up, your doing great & again nicely done.
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Critique By:
N M (K:4879)
4/9/2005 11:41:44 AM
This shot really has a lot of love in it, and I like the way you made the hair cover all of the frame. Looks fake yes, but it adds a lot to the shot.Keep up the great work. I won't be doing any updating for about a week cause I'm on holiday back at home.
regards,
Niclas
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Critique By:
Luka Gojceta (K:1224)
4/7/2005 12:20:37 AM
Apart from the fact you cut off the model's head and shoulders, and her face being a bit out of focus, it's a nice shot. I like how you used the blanket for the background, it gives great texture, tones and shadows. Nice job using more DOF to keep it in focus.
Keep shooting.
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Critique By:
Bob Aldridge (K:14758)
4/6/2005 9:58:12 PM
An exellent twin portrate I am not a B&W person but I love this one exellent work Elizabeth, you are getting very good at it now,Best Regards....
Bob Alridge.
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/6/2005 9:37:36 PM
thanks man
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/6/2005 9:36:32 PM
heh heh thanks!
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Critique By:
Raf D (K:9223)
4/6/2005 6:04:57 PM
Ha, teachers!!!!!  I guess I can understand why the teacher would say that, in the strictest technique, he/she can invoke the overexposure and lack of balance argument. But it is this so called "mistake" that I think makes the picture so much more interesting. Hey art is about interpretation and personal point of view! I'll come over and have a chat hehehehe! well done! --R.
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Critique By:
Luka Gojceta (K:1224)
4/5/2005 11:16:05 PM
Dreamy...
Nice cheerful image. Well done.
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Critique By:
David Hofmann (K:22223)
4/5/2005 11:10:05 PM
nice idea and effect.
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Critique By:
Roland Lacson (K:12214)
4/5/2005 2:56:37 AM
I prefer the b&w version Niclas did to your image, with color removed what's left is the real essence of meaning & it's integral parts. I share your opinion regarding the dock coming from the right which is distracting, as for the type of camera utilized, it really dosen't matter Elizabeth because in the end it's the image that speaks not the camera. Thanks so much btw for your recent kind comments, cheers.
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/4/2005 9:48:46 PM
thankyou!
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/4/2005 9:47:58 PM
thank you my photo teacher last semester said that it was a mistake and i needed to change it for the grade i didnt change it though! lol
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Critique By:
Ramiro Pérez Funes (K:120)
4/4/2005 8:35:39 PM
Elizabeth:
There isnt?t mistake here. The glare can express like colours or shadows. I?ll take a sit
Dreamy work
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Critique By:
- - (K:10510)
4/4/2005 7:56:36 PM
you have a great portfolio.. and i like this one especially..
congrats,
cheers.. =)
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Critique By:
Raf D (K:9223)
4/4/2005 4:00:10 PM
Excellent composition! I like the repetitive patterns of the chairs. I don't think the glare is a "mistake", I think it fits nicely with the image as it transforms it from a simple B&W still-life to a more dreamy and immaginative picture IMHO. It's almost like there is a veil over the image -- Kind regards, Rafael
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Critique By:
vito lentini (K:13130)
4/4/2005 12:18:33 PM
Nice work congrt ciao vito++++
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Critique By:
Roland Lacson (K:12214)
4/4/2005 4:49:50 AM
Yes Elizabeth you can actually resubmit the same photo (Edited Version), but before doing so make sure you remove the previous one from the site. If you no longer have the original file saved in your PC folder (My Documents/Pictures) then your only option is to mail that same photo from your portfolio to your address then from there to PS. FYI doing so will degrade the image to a certain degree, hope this answers your question, best wishes.
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/4/2005 4:02:29 AM
if you want to replace a phot after you fix it can you edit the image or do you have to resubmitt it?
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Critique By:
N M (K:4879)
4/4/2005 3:36:05 AM
Nice one! I like your portfolio a lot. As most said, a bit too dark at some parts but a great shot other than that! Keep on sharing nice shots like this =)
Regards,
Niclas
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Critique By:
Andrea Harris (K:2496)
4/4/2005 12:24:20 AM
Very nice, free feel. Above her head were her hair and sky meet looks a little blurred like maybe it was softened? This really is fantastic work you have - you should be proud!
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Critique By:
Andrea Harris (K:2496)
4/4/2005 12:22:51 AM
Super angle, creates some fun! I think if you were more focused on her face, the background would blur some and she would be in better detail. Great work!
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Critique By:
Andrea Harris (K:2496)
4/4/2005 12:21:56 AM
Wow! You're only 16??? You have a wonderful talent God has given you, don't give up on this - very impressive portfolio thus far!
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/4/2005 12:00:46 AM
thankyou i did darken it befor i posted it here i guese i shouldnt have but i think i am going to crop alittle off the top and see how that looks too
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Critique By:
elizabeth cain (K:220)
4/3/2005 11:58:45 PM
thank you! after reading that it popped out at me i was trying to figure out what was bothering me about it
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