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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
4/19/2004 4:49:35 AM
A perfect Split ratio, well done. The Ratio however is a little harsh and should be brought up too a 1:5 instead of the 1:9 that you have achieved here. A little fill should take care of this.
The model seems to static, try a foot backward and have the model put all his weight on that foot. This should create a nice S curve that we all look for in posing.
You also seem to be getting wrap around from the yellow gelled light in the background, try a flag.
Finally, the model looks bored have some fun!
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| Photo By: Claudio Fett
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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
11/20/2003 4:04:11 PM
Yellow? A bit, the colder version of this is well....too cold! Its not as inviting as this version. Thanks for the good words....
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| Photo By: Justin Myers
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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
4/13/2002 11:12:11 AM
I think it is. I love the composition but the image is a tad bit dark for my tastes. It might just be my monitor though
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| Photo By: Chris Blaszczyk
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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
3/25/2002 1:31:20 PM
I like these portraits much better than the serious ones. I think it shows their true personality.
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| Photo By: Glenn Sweet
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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
3/11/2002 12:22:28 PM
That caption makes a great photo even better. I think you should print this, and add that caption on just as it is here.
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| Photo By: Amy K. Chapin
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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
2/25/2002 1:18:02 PM
Great photo,
The only two things I would change is a shallower (is that a word??) depth of field and adjust the cropping so we can see the top of her head.
I really like the non reflective sunglasses.
-Justin
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| Photo By: Chris Blaszczyk
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Critique By:
Justin Myers (K:116)
1/30/2002 7:19:11 PM
I rather like the sun "burning" through the flag. I think the only thing I would do is do a little work on his face, it seems a little flat.
-Justin
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| Photo By: lee j haire
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