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Critique By:
Alison DuFlon (K:36566)
8/10/2004 12:05:30 AM
This is fun, I like that as you follow the road, it seems to turn into a river. To me the cropping is great. Alison
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
8/10/2004 12:05:17 AM
Hi Sidarta, Beautifully composed shot. The meandering road into the forrest is magical. Great shot. The crop is quite good, I think. Not too centered. Improving the crop is more difficult than improving the composition, I think. There are a few things that I notice. Above all the screamingly hard green tones. There seems to be a slight green film over the entire image. Secondly, I think the image becomes a bit blurry after the first bend in the path. Other than that, I do like this shot. Attached, a slightly tweaked version, with a hue, level and saturation change, and also a tighter crop. (I removed the unmowed weeds near the first bend in the path, not much of a difference, let alone an improvement)
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Daniel Silva (K:2512)
8/9/2004 11:56:05 PM
what a meandering road! I also think the crop looks fine
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Critique By:
Sid . (K:3140)
8/9/2004 11:50:53 PM
Thanks to Chuck and Jeff! That's exactly what I was toying with and wasn't sure which would look better. Each version (of crops) has its own "charm."
And, yes Chuck, I am still learning but wanted to do so on an older set of cameras (I have an older version Asahi Pentax from the '60s).
Thank you again.
Sid
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
8/9/2004 11:23:27 PM
Sid, I think it look fine the way it is. If you want, you could crop about 1/3 off the bottom for a slightly different look and perspective but I think what really make this image is the road covering the entire bottom of the frame and diminishing meanderingly into the distance. Excellent photo.
Jeff
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
8/9/2004 11:10:06 PM
I think crop is okay. Looks like it was made with 120 camera. Thanks for using great little camera and real film.
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Critique By:
Ray Gould (K:1539)
8/7/2004 1:16:43 AM
Nice perspective and lighting.
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
8/7/2004 12:26:44 AM
Very well done and a great perspective. I like the red "glow" on the wall and the darkness on top. Really does look ominous.
Jeff
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
8/6/2004 12:05:48 AM
Not much to improve. Good exposure, good crop and composition. The only thing that would have made this better and which you have NO control over is if there were some clouds in the photo to add some color and/or drama to the sky. Otherwise, an excellent job!
Jeff
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Critique By:
Sam Andre (K:12484)
8/5/2004 9:56:38 PM
very nice detail, the red flowers peeking around the corner are a great touch in this composition
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Critique By:
Evan Agnew (K:1292)
7/30/2004 4:23:59 AM
Nice shot! Moving things always seem to elude me
Keep up the good work.
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Critique By:
Phil Monger (K:296)
7/29/2004 2:48:02 AM
Always hard with something against the Sky, try upping the exposure compensation and then resaturating the sky to get the planes and sky balanced. Just experiment!
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
7/29/2004 12:38:35 AM
Nice capture! Looks fine to me considering the circumstances.
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Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
7/28/2004 3:31:42 AM
Excellent panning job!
Dave.
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Critique By:
Evan Agnew (K:1292)
7/28/2004 3:03:28 AM
Well done Sid!
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
7/27/2004 11:53:06 PM
Nice capture! Good panning to capture the jet. Excellent job with a difficult situation.
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Critique By:
Saeed Al Shamsi (K:47735)
7/27/2004 11:34:34 AM
Excellent shot,love to see the rigt wing,though original,Saeed
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
7/27/2004 2:28:54 AM
Nice job! Good exposure and contrast.
Jeff
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Critique By:
Sid . (K:3140)
7/26/2004 11:07:46 PM
Hi Ryan,
Yes, I believe it is. Although, I cannot say for certain.
Thanks for the comment.
Sid
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Critique By:
Ryan Greene (K:3297)
7/26/2004 11:01:02 PM
Great capture, I always liked this bomber, it's a B-1B right?
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Critique By:
Sid . (K:3140)
7/26/2004 8:26:58 PM
Actually, I did recrop it and post it again after it was featured. Except I cropped it with the big tree more to the right and the little tree to the left. The space between the two trees made up the middle of the shot. Thus, the rule of thirds. I appreciate the suggestion, though. I hadn't even tried doing it the way you suggested. Looks good.
Cheers,
Sid
P.S. Thanks for your input.
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Critique By:
Michel Pettigrew (K:975)
7/25/2004 9:20:22 PM
I love the softness, the colors and the painted feeling of your picture. Since everybody is talking about recropping, I tried my shot at it.
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Critique By:
Hulusi Sogutlu (K:171)
7/25/2004 6:21:15 PM
I like it very much. Very minimalist capture! it will be better with a little bit more contrast in my opinion. congratulations!
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Critique By:
Andrea Forti (K:3069)
7/25/2004 12:24:52 PM
Bellissima, esaltante.
AF
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Critique By:
Andrea Falqui (K:5787)
7/25/2004 11:02:41 AM
I love this image. I love as you captured the perpective by using shadows...
Ciao
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Critique By:
Evan Agnew (K:1292)
7/23/2004 11:47:57 PM
I have never seen the Ambultory look so good! Great shot Sid.
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Critique By:
Jeff Fiore (K:11277)
7/23/2004 10:56:12 AM
Wheather it is the result intended or not, it works. Sometimes accidents can be good.
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Critique By:
Saeed Al Shamsi (K:47735)
7/23/2004 6:35:49 AM
Perfect angle shot,the light and shadow of excellent choice,very outstanding photography,Saeed
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Critique By:
drilan P drilan (K:12030)
7/23/2004 12:32:31 AM
Belle composition ; bien joué.
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Critique By:
Marcia . (K:16108)
7/22/2004 11:48:19 PM
It makes a great composition. I like it.
Congratulations.
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