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Critique By:
Igor Herzyk (K:1937)
9/7/2004 9:01:22 PM
All is ok, but I wish I could see more action outside... there are people, but they don't add to the photo in the way they are here. Or the second choice is the same photo without people.
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| Photo By: ukasz roth
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Critique By:
Viktor Pravdica (K:4907)
9/4/2004 10:15:31 PM
I like it
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| Photo By: ukasz roth
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Critique By:
Sam Andre (K:12484)
9/2/2004 9:38:08 PM
In a world without Gates, who would need Windows?!??
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Critique By:
ukasz roth (K:47)
8/28/2004 9:20:29 AM
the natural light was insufficient. it was too dark so had no choise.I had a tripod but if I had used it this person going up would have to stand there for a long time.so I used flash.if I cropped the left side of photo this bright triangle in the corner would look strange.nevermind.maybe it looks unnatural but I like it anyway :-)
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Critique By:
Igor Herzyk (K:1937)
8/27/2004 6:50:16 PM
Treated by flash? Quite sick it is. I don't like the left part which is disturbing. Lighting could be natural, would be better (I understand you didn't have a tripod to keep it sharp:-) Or maybe natural lighting wasn't interssting?
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Critique By:
ukasz roth (K:47)
8/27/2004 10:40:45 AM
thanks but what do you mean by telling "more hight" ?? I will be grateful if you explain me
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Critique By:
Shady Adly (K:7814)
8/27/2004 1:13:25 AM
very nice shot ukasz,but i think it needs to show more hight, anyway good work.
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Critique By:
velociraptor (K:692)
8/24/2004 7:58:00 PM
Strano punto di vista ma comunque una bella foto.
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Critique By:
Blazej Lindner (K:3221)
8/23/2004 9:02:02 PM
nice
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Critique By:
Maria José Barres (K:11276)
8/23/2004 7:44:20 PM
Great composition and color!
Very good street shot!
Greetings. 7+
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| Photo By: ukasz roth
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Critique By:
Antonio Trincone (K:23167)
8/23/2004 7:07:45 PM
this has an excellent mood in it, like the sepia tone too
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Critique By:
Igor Herzyk (K:1937)
8/23/2004 7:02:24 PM
It's cool, I like it a lot (it shows the atmosphere of this fine place) but if I were you I would crop it to ideal square to have a better balance - without 1,5 centimeter from left. But it's only a detail... Nice tone and composition. Quality sucks:-)
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Critique By:
Maciek Mis (K:565)
8/10/2004 8:57:18 PM
Chyba to co z nich zostalo :-) Kiedys pracowalem w drukarni i tez upadla :-(
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Critique By:
Mohamed Aboelkhier (K:129)
8/6/2004 9:29:09 PM
mmm nice picture, i like the perspective & the colors, but i feel it unfocused, but finally good shot
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Critique By:
Stjepan Banovic (K:571)
7/10/2004 7:51:37 PM
I like it. Great perpective.
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Critique By:
Tony Diana (K:13396)
7/10/2004 4:06:57 PM
Estupendo encuadre y punto de vista
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Critique By:
Igor Herzyk (K:1937)
5/15/2004 6:55:18 PM
Hi ukasz. This is probably the best picture in your portfolio. That's because you took it just in a perfect moment in time. I can really see the passion on the boy's face. That's great!
On a technical side, I agree with Thilo (he made a point about the tonal range here and indeed it would be better with a little bit higher contrast and more greys. The composition is also something that could be improved, I mean that on the left and right there should be more space (his arm and the violin's bow are cropped and in my opinion it shouldn't be that way), there could be a bit more space at the top as well.
The quality could also be improved, but it's a matter of bad scanner I suppose
Best wishes, Igor
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Critique By:
Ian Crean (K:14866)
5/10/2004 9:21:17 PM
Ukasz, the image is great with the contrast between the real and drawn faces, and also the diagonal shadow creates a dynamic element. Whilst your friend has a street punk style she also portrays a certain classic beauty and elegance, quite lovely smiling eyes.
I see you use the Zenit, I learned with the Zenit E, no subsitute for it.
Jose commented about the jpg compression artefacts, if you can scan and work on the image in TIFF(a 'lossless' format) then only compress to JPG(which degrades the image every time you save) at the last minute for web this should not happen. Cheers, Ian
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Critique By:
Thilo Bayer (K:50358)
5/10/2004 8:40:02 PM
nice shot, ukasz. you catched a strong moment of passion. you may add some more tonal range here but that's just my opinion. good one! cheers, thilo
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Critique By:
robert jedrusik (K:806)
5/9/2004 6:27:38 PM
pasjonujaca pasja pasjonujacego skrzypka i pasjunujacego fotografa ;-)
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Critique By:
JL E (K:9693)
5/7/2004 1:18:22 AM
Excellent!!!!
I can not understand it has only one comment... the people is blind!
Very nice work, I enjoy it too much. You've done a beautiful job with expresion (so beautiful and natural in fact), lighting and composition.
Is a pity the jpg quality is not the best, but I like so much the composition.
congratulations!
cheers from Argentina.
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Critique By:
Raoul Endres (K:2676)
5/6/2004 6:48:27 AM
The bright light enahnces the happy look here I think. Great shot.
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Critique By:
Bob Smith (K:2340)
5/4/2004 10:55:50 PM
I mean the way the subject faces the upper right corner instead of facing the right side.
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Critique By:
Gregory Roth (K:868)
5/4/2004 9:25:36 PM
Haha. Very funny picture, Mr Roth.
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Critique By:
ukasz roth (K:47)
5/4/2004 7:24:58 PM
thanks.what do you mean by writing angle???
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Critique By:
Bob Smith (K:2340)
5/3/2004 3:19:50 PM
Nice shot. I like the angle, adds to the photo.
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