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Critique By:
Ferran Rial (K:6670)
4/12/2006 4:51:22 AM
Strange colors and textures David. I like them!
ferran
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Critique By:
g g (K:-409)
4/11/2006 2:36:58 PM
salut david
j'aime bien cette photo
jaime surtous la pigmentation mais la composition pose quelque petit problème nil aurait fallu peut être revoir le cadrage. sinon l'escalier présente des texture géniale.
je devrait recomencer à remertre des photo j'en des bien qui s'en vienne si non continue ton bon travail j'adore ce que tu fait...
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Critique By:
Steve Aronoff (K:18393)
4/4/2006 3:26:11 PM
Great composition and capture, David. There is only one thing that bothers me somewhat, and that is that the woman's clothes and hair are so dark that the face feels like it is a face that could have been added to a silhouette of a person. She has an almost marionette feel to her, and this is enhanced by the verticals of the light fixture above her head. So I would prefer to see just a little more detail in her clothes. Other than that, it's a very well done portrait.
Steve
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Critique By:
Ian McIntosh (K:42997)
4/4/2006 6:05:43 AM
This push processing produces such nice grain here. Great work!
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Critique By:
Ian McIntosh (K:42997)
4/4/2006 5:57:27 AM
I am sure a happy occasion but excellent effect.
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Critique By:
Ian McIntosh (K:42997)
4/4/2006 5:51:45 AM
Au contraire!
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Critique By:
Brian Fillmore (K:4016)
4/2/2006 6:33:08 PM
Looks like a great angle to view from. Tri-x I miss the days of using black and white film. Great range of tones and contrasts.
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| Photo By: David Mongeau-Petitpas
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
3/31/2006 2:50:19 AM
Muy buena perspectiva.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
3/31/2006 2:48:32 AM
Muy buen retrato, Me gusta!
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Critique By:
Tom Ross (K:6453)
3/31/2006 1:54:01 AM
Very edgy, David. Great style.
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Critique By:
Katy Simmons Assi (K:3009)
3/25/2006 2:23:54 PM
I love the effect of pushing the film, very concentrated black and white. Because the woman's legs are against the bright white floor I feel my eyes are more diverted here rather than to her face because of the massive contrast, maybe it could have been improved by bringing her forward a step or two.
I like the repetitive detail of the ceiling and how she is seemingly finding it as interesting as I am!
Over all its a great image, well done!
Katy
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
3/23/2006 7:01:35 PM
Hi David,
"It's all about feelings", according to your bio. And I do think the feel in this one is very present and quite strong, but a feeling which is also quite difficult to describe / place. I think I go for style more than fashion, though.
The hard contrast creates a very unreal and somewhat uncomfortable feeling. The woman, seemingly out of place in this urban scenery, looking around as if searching for the way only emphasises that feeling.
The composition is very well balanced, good use of diagonals and the division of dark areas, boxing in the overexposed part in the middle is great! I'd get rid of the triangle in the top left colour, though. a sole blemish on an otherwise very powerful shot.
Cheers,
Hugo
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| Photo By: David Mongeau-Petitpas
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Critique By:
g g (K:-409)
3/19/2006 3:39:09 PM
super t'est nouvelle photo jaimme bien les contrats dans celle si. en plus la composition est exellente
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Critique By:
Helen Peart (K:135)
3/14/2006 11:04:22 AM
I really do like this image, the burnt out exposure really compliments the location and atmosphere of the image and the young girl's look suggests that there is another element to the image outside of the frame.
My only criticism is that the image is very straightforward- it looks nice but it would be better if there was some action or movement somewhere within the frame.
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Critique By:
Bryce Hughes (K:2957)
3/14/2006 6:32:40 AM
Hey,
Looks to me like it was a tough exposure with the right hand side blown out, but you might be going for this effect i dont know? I dont really have anything to offer except for the poles aren't dead on horizontal (at least thats what my tired eyes are tellin me) but yeah thats only a sliht nit pick  Otherwise you've got a nice depth of field going on here..
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
3/13/2006 5:36:44 PM
hello david.. a very powerful image dark and strong!
just a meditation zen..
cheers
roby
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Critique By:
Karl Steyn (K:258)
3/12/2006 4:04:29 PM
Dramatic and unpredictable image. The two hotspots in the eyes rob you of super drama. Lose the bottom reflections and see the difference. There is also a light area in the bcakround that does not contribute to your story here. Very attractive angle.
Karl
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Critique By:
Herman Pieters (K:508)
3/11/2006 7:00:18 AM
wow, great pic, donno why u get no comments on this
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Critique By:
Paul's Photos (K:35235)
3/10/2006 8:40:27 PM
nice work... love the composition.. good lighting...
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Critique By:
Elisabeth D'Amico (K:6674)
3/10/2006 8:07:44 AM
A very nice shot! very good the black and white tone. Eli:-))
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Critique By:
sanjeev jain (K:8763)
3/10/2006 4:51:24 AM
this has some substance other are just created but of no use i like this one ...good shot
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Critique By:
Jim Goldstein (K:21230)
3/10/2006 4:42:31 AM
I like the contrasty look from pushing the film. Given the patterns in the lighting and textures of the station you have a great environment to photograph in. I like the tension created by the static and moving individuals. Very neat shot.
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Critique By:
Eric Simpson (K:2348)
3/10/2006 3:32:37 AM
I really love Tri-X pushed. used to see a lot of work from a guy who used to push to 6400 and beyond. Amazing stuff from him. He was also from Canada. Excellent work here.
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Critique By:
Randee Armstrong (K:-820)
3/8/2006 5:55:52 PM
I really like this, you have some really interesting photos. I like your style.
It almost looks like a soft abstract painting hung in the waiting area. Good work!
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Critique By:
Randee Armstrong (K:-820)
3/8/2006 5:52:59 PM
I really like this, the tones, grain and composition are great. It is really quite interesting to view. I like the white shadow in the upper corner too... makes me wonder what it is!
Good job.
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Critique By:
Sum ob (K:4665)
3/8/2006 2:37:02 AM
This is very artistic. Cheers!
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
3/8/2006 1:10:11 AM
Un gran retrato, en mi opinión molesta la linea escura en el estremo superior izquierdo.
Un abrazo!
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| Photo By: David Mongeau-Petitpas
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
3/8/2006 1:08:22 AM
Excelente retrato.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Carmen Fuchs (K:6967)
3/7/2006 6:49:40 AM
Good image. I like it.
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Critique By:
Tom Ross (K:6453)
3/7/2006 12:36:25 AM
David, this is is art photography at it's best. Please keep it up. Usefilm needs this type of work.
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