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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
4/24/2004 11:44:29 PM
This is a very evocative image. I find it interesting that at least one person has speculated on whether it is posed or captures the moment of a specific (and obviously erotic) event.
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| Photo By: Kelly Hackney
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
4/9/2004 1:46:53 PM
This images has lots of good things going for it. I think that you have done a very nice job with this image.
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| Photo By: Kelly Hackney
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
4/9/2004 1:40:29 PM
Nice smile and expression, beautiful all the way. This lovely model I feel is cropped a little tight and off if thats the word for it. So tell why is it horizontal and not verical. Is the crop having a purpose, holding a functional use.
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| Photo By: Kelly Hackney
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
4/1/2004 12:42:44 PM
You made a great portrait here on that note this piece is wonderful! Some parts of the work looks amazing, although some parts look a little bit "unfinished". I love the softness in her hair and hand, and her eye forms and eye colour is beautiful, but maybe a little bit more softness is needed there too? And only keep the inner parts of eyes sharp? Or I might be wrong I don't know. Anyway, the expression is really wonderful!
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| Photo By: Tamara L
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
4/1/2004 9:43:11 AM
This is wow all the way, awesome title for an awesome image here. Like a piece of art to hang on my living room wall above the fire place. I take 2 please.... with or with out hangers you may ask 
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| Photo By: Kim Culbert
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
4/1/2004 9:38:03 AM
Great image here rich colors highly wow factor here. You think a lower angle of few so the tree framing you image here would become more of a focal point... or is it the sun raise?
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| Photo By: Kim Culbert
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/31/2004 2:39:40 PM
I see you not trying to capture physical beauty, which is considered as the goal of art by many people. Does it help to have an attractive model that she is, for sure. But trying to capture the psychology apart from visual values. You may need to think on your photos. You could look at them for at least a minute, and try to see them. To see what tell are telling the viewer, and I like what they are saying.
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| Photo By: Tamara L
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/31/2004 2:14:04 PM
I have admired this shot for quite some time, and now that I am a member I can comment. The intriguing thing to me is that you cannot tell the age of the model - there is a beautiful childlike quality, something that I am always looking for - even my most sophistocated models. Whether you call it innocence or childlike wisdom - this shot rocks. And a super technique with your Photo shop skills once more.
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| Photo By: shelby koning
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/30/2004 7:43:12 PM
A perfect photo, all the surroundings are fine dialectical factors that do not deter from the Image. Actually they reinforce it. How could anybody in all honesty get distracted by anything in this picture in the presence of such a delightful beauty? Everything has to have a balance and the elements which may be considered odd here add to the gracefulness of this shot. As a composition is great, the surroundings act as enhancers not distractions from the shot as a matter of contrasted factors put into play by you the photographer creating a balance between the elements and this perfection incarnated. Photography works well with contrast. Doesn't it?
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| Photo By: Tamara L
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/30/2004 6:54:55 AM
This is a very good piece in your collection...harmony of idea and form in good composition, the coffee mug in the woman's hands is so strong point, along with the male figure here. Bright atmosphere helps you to have a better contrast and soft expose. This photo was attractive in a sunny day or obtained through strobe. The composition is good, however I think the empty space or lets just call the right half of this photoin could be less, as far as the rest goes a splendid shot. Nice Job!
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| Photo By: Tamara L
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/24/2004 6:15:47 AM
I think at this photo of yours is very well done. The one question for you is... what time of day was this shot at? Being down there myself for part of the shooting season would like so tips.
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| Photo By: larry white
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/22/2004 7:40:13 PM
Cute model nice pose ok lighting, some might say less hair more focus on the face but I like it as is very sexy. not a fancy or outstanding photo but I like it right down to the black shoes lots of detail for someone that looks for it. I wouldn't mind seeing a little more of her one eye and a little more light in the eyes.
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| Photo By: J. Alberto Abreu
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/19/2004 10:56:03 AM
Kelly one make one photogenic model here. But a I think a tripod would help alot with your next self-pic and I see your in the bath room... hhhhmmmm A beautiful model like yourself needs something more on your level of beauty than whatz behind you
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| Photo By: Kelly C
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/19/2004 10:39:03 AM
Very cool photo here.... the one thing I like most about it is its perspective, would like to see a lil more of your left foot
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| Photo By: Liz Chaffin
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/19/2004 7:52:54 AM
This image is coming across as bold and strong for the most part brought across in the models stance.
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| Photo By: Oscar Pinto
(K:286)
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/18/2004 2:36:05 PM
Wonderful look with a great model. Nice lighting, tones and pose. the way you have composed the scene is brilliant. It`s Dark and moody! it's a classic!!!. All my best
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| Photo By: Sarah Chatham
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/18/2004 10:38:14 AM
This image comes across strong but it gives a feel of softness. I like your use of bold shaddows and the mood that comes out of expression.
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| Photo By: rai rish
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/17/2004 2:31:46 PM
very beautiful setting. the model is working very well the this image... the lighting I feel is to harsh for this soft feeling image.
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| Photo By: Claudia Cabada
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/12/2004 1:40:32 PM
Very attractive lady. You have caught her eyes very well. I think that because of the shape her hair makes in the frame of the image, the color rendition works very effectively.
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| Photo By: jose da silva
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
3/12/2004 1:35:05 PM
A perfectly wonderful image which incorporates a gorgeous model in a very sensuous pose and just standing in a relaxed position. Her beauty is well shown with your photographic ability. Nice Job!!!
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| Photo By: jose da silva
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Critique By:
Jonathan Wollin (K:958)
10/31/2003 10:49:37 AM
I luv the monochromatic look, along with the far off expression is what makes this image rock.
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| Photo By: Jacek Jedrzejczak Konrad
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