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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
9/19/2004 1:38:25 AM
The photo is brilliant, IMHO, all the computer graphics that don't fit the style. The self-marketing is overpowering an otherwise artistic shot. Love to see it without
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| Photo By: T-zone Palermo
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/25/2004 3:34:21 PM
Interesting composition, everything seems to be truncated, your shadow, the dock, the ocean,...
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Photo By: Wayne Harridge
(K:18292)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/25/2004 3:31:25 PM
Thank You,
fz
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| Photo By: f z
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/23/2004 3:32:34 PM
Jo,
in fact it is Corte.
And you are correct again, the contrast between the black wall and the bright sky was too much to handle for my camera.
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| Photo By: f z
(K:291)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/21/2004 10:38:26 PM
Moody and fantastic
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| Photo By: Jim Christensen
(K:18843)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
3/17/2004 1:07:55 PM
interesting idea, but needs a better context (like one of your fantastic background) to work. It's just too low-tech!
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| Photo By: Haleh B
(K:3741)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
3/15/2004 1:00:44 PM
Haleh, don't listen to Danish, he's trying to cage your bird!
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| Photo By: Haleh B
(K:3741)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/23/2004 11:59:01 AM
genuine, you could feel this picture...
I wish the pole wasn't there, even though it makes an interesting contribution to the composition of the picture...
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| Photo By: Andrea B.
(K:1741)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/19/2004 10:01:42 PM
A good shot but can imprive with better light distribution and difusion.
I am not sure why you pointed out the studio thing, but the plain white backdrop is not the working well for the background. Also the backdrop is not carefully draped and is creating shadow effects in the background that are not helpful.
Your model has an interesting look (of almost disbelief) on her, but she looks fine and engaging.
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| Photo By: Michael Grace-Martin
(K:10183)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/15/2004 10:39:46 AM
This was hard to shoot and even harder to compress. The canvas retains its detail but Compression is causing unevenness and noise that takes away the smooth texture of the paint and the details on the knife!!!
I appreciate your comments and suggestions.
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| Photo By: f z
(K:291)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:42:23 PM
You have one of the most dramatic portofolios on usefilm.
I love your work.
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| Photo By: Ania Fedisz
(K:57)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:40:25 PM
nearly perfect.
Much better looking than Juan Valdez ;-)
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| Photo By: Ania Fedisz
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:35:59 PM
WOW!
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| Photo By: Joe Pan
(K:549)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:28:20 PM
like the shot, but as a autoportrait, i wish there was more of you...
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| Photo By: maria elisa duque
(K:1503)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:25:15 PM
what was the transformation?
is it a digital filter application?
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| Photo By: marta boro
(K:3245)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:13:34 PM
is this you or are you the reflected one?
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| Photo By: maria elisa duque
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 5:01:30 PM
Excellent idea and execution
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 4:59:36 PM
splendid interplay of light shining through and reflecting off the surface textures
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| Photo By: Ursula I Abresch
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/14/2004 4:45:21 PM
Good texture.
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| Photo By: Haleh B
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/11/2004 10:07:14 PM
is that what it looks like?
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| Photo By: gheorghe(rec) florucza
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
2/11/2004 10:05:43 PM
Annemarie,
great idea! It does look like an alien landscape. You have a good eye for what most people would just walk by. Since you asked, here are my suggestions (again!): Increasing the depth of field (DOF) via the apperture setting (a higher number) brings more of the view in focus. My guess is that something (like the tip of a branch) was obstructing the view and since it was out of focus it caused that blurry spot. This happens often in macro shots and you typically have to work around them. If all fails, you can crop the image as was suggested. To hold the camera still you can either use a tripod (or something like a little bean bag) or just rest it on firm ground. At times even pressing the shutter causes the camera to shake(especially in low light conditions) You could even use the timer feature to make sure that the camera doesn't move when the shutter is released.
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| Photo By: Annemarie Cracknell
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
1/31/2004 8:19:10 PM
Good foto, sharper depth of field and more light would have made it even better.
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| Photo By: can ayan
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
9/26/2003 10:16:47 PM
halographic. It's amazing how you have projected multiple personalities into one picture. Excellent art.
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| Photo By: Jonathan Kane
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
9/20/2003 8:50:49 AM
Excellent composition and color. It's an unreal scene, I love the micro/macro sclae of things. The trees in the back, and then the hint of other things in the way back. Siena? mai vista cosi 
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| Photo By: Francesco Martini
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/29/2003 9:37:43 AM
Cool, very cool.
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| Photo By: Rui Leitão
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/28/2003 5:07:37 PM
Hakan,
they were indeed. I actually remember what the were playing which was the most beautiful rendition of "O Sole Mio" that I have ever heard, and trust me I have heard many versions of that song
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| Photo By: f z
(K:291)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/26/2003 9:00:44 PM
Lovely picture, just soft enough, the crop is a bit too tight IMO, but good color and composition nevertheless
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| Photo By: Beth Lindsey
(K:0)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/26/2003 8:58:17 PM
It says it all, this summer's over, waiting for the next...
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| Photo By: Larry Edwards
(K:843)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/26/2003 8:49:32 PM
Interesting macro work with good DOF. I wish the bottom had better focus to help the viewer's eye move up. Interesting subject and title.
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| Photo By: Marcel Laurens
(K:3654)
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Critique By:
f z (K:291)
8/26/2003 2:38:12 PM
Wow, very good shot. it sort of looks back at you, like a bloodshot eye.
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| Photo By: Marcel Laurens
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