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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/26/2003 8:24:06 PM
nice documentary photo of an interesting craft I'm glad you included the ones that were cooling as well as the piece he is currently working on it gives a sense of seeing what he is doing.
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| Photo By: Mavis Dean
(K:3962)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/26/2003 8:21:02 PM
beautiful scene definately makes one wish they were there
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| Photo By: Mike Hollman
(K:315)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/26/2003 8:18:53 PM
strong lines and great compostion on them.
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| Photo By: David Fenn
(K:79)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/26/2003 8:17:00 PM
The focus appears to be strongest on the branch behind the one the bird is feeding on. I can't imagine trying to focus on the bird the way those little guys move but maybe on the branch he was on?
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| Photo By: CJ McKendry
(K:1388)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/26/2003 8:14:18 PM
This shot has some nice framing going on I wish it was framing more then just the hill I think the addition of a person would be wonderful here. However as it is the only nitpick I have is the foreground I think some of it could be cropped off to make it even more powerful.
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Photo By: Robert Gaither
(K:34128)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/25/2003 8:36:34 PM
I like the fact that the newton rings from the sun are showing in this shot. I also like that the slightly out of focus bloom is just under the focused one it is still recognizable yet doesn't distract the eye from your primary focus. I might have tried using a reflector to bounce a bit of light back on to the front of the berries but that is a personal preference. Well done!
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| Photo By: Diana Cornelissen
(K:26437)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/25/2003 4:00:08 PM
This is absolutely a beautiful image that I'm sure the parents (if Julie isn't yours) are very proud to have and hang. This is a timeless portrait that gives the instant awwwww emotional feeling. Well done!!
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| Photo By: Louise Vessey
(K:13862)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/25/2003 3:16:14 PM
I think a different composition so that the base of the gate didn't fall so center both vertically and horizontally. I do however love the toning for this image it gives just the right mood to the buildings.
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| Photo By: Dick van Breda
(K:4655)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/25/2003 3:01:27 PM
I am totally torn on this shot I like the panoramic view of the shot but I also think I would prefer the couple not centered. If you gave it a square crop it would make it IMHO a more "plain" or ordinary shot so for that reason I like the panoramic. I like that they are in motion but I'm not sure that is enough to break up the centering. Not sure that answered any of your questions, sorry.
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| Photo By: Louise Vessey
(K:13862)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/25/2003 1:11:51 PM
beautiful colors I think I'd have preferred less water though.
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| Photo By: Dmitry Pushilov
(K:214)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:39:32 PM
Wish the truck wasn't so centered in the frame. Love the dog there.
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| Photo By: Andreas Schroeder
(K:221)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:38:27 PM
wonderful abstract created by this experimentation!
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| Photo By: Rick Page
(K:5242)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:37:29 PM
i love the colors in this shot and the lonliness it makes me feel when viewing it is strong.
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| Photo By: Abhik Basu
(K:330)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:36:23 PM
The glass glare on his glasses seems to distract from a handsome face. I do like the pose on the car and the tone of the image.
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| Photo By: Sahil Siqueira
(K:63)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:33:06 PM
I like how the road leads the eye to the house I wish it wasn't so close to center but there is so much else going on here with flowers and shrubs that it makes it a wonderful shot to get lost in a while.
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| Photo By: Carol Watson
(K:5185)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:28:25 PM
great detail and love the water drops I wish the stem would have remained sharper.
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| Photo By: Juan Sánchez
(K:5441)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:26:37 PM
Cedric nice to see you over here. I like the flower and can see why you chose to shoot it, however I think it would be a bit stronger in a vertical shot losing the tree over on the right.
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| Photo By: Cedric Sims
(K:3259)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 10:30:40 PM
answering your question DOF is Depth of field the part of the image that falls in focus.  )
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| Photo By: Wilson Junior
(K:2092)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:47:48 AM
You captured the reds well I think a softer light on the blooms would imrove this for me personally.
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| Photo By: Gerry Vincent
(K:3154)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:46:33 AM
great choice of green against the b/w background I think the green could be taken a bit further down to the ground so that the entire thing is colored
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| Photo By: lucio brando
(K:2295)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:44:15 AM
The bush doesn't bother me where it is but the darkness of it with the subdued background seems a bit odd. the composition is great!
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| Photo By: Claudio Guzman
(K:147)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:38:30 AM
closer then I want to see a bug ewww. but very interesting all the same!
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| Photo By: Joe Pan
(K:549)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:21:33 AM
Interesting closeup but a larger DOF would have improved this for me personally.
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| Photo By: Wilson Junior
(K:2092)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/24/2003 11:17:18 AM
nice abstract Judy I think I would like it even better with just the 3 pieces on the left but it is well done either way.
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| Photo By: Judy Kessler
(K:6316)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/23/2003 5:39:08 PM
I wish all the lightening bolts didn't end so abruptly in a harsh line. I also wish I could see this larger for more detail.
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| Photo By: Brian Schneider
(K:313)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/23/2003 5:37:48 PM
I too would like to see it larger but as it is I would say a slight rotation to the viewers left would help here I thought at first it was an optical illusion of the tall structure however the shadowed black space at the bottom is larger on one side then the other and after the beautiful sky that was the first thing I saw.
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| Photo By: Jon Pankhurst
(K:577)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/23/2003 5:35:01 PM
I think personally I'd like a tad cropped off the right side where the bright light is as the edge of the frame, it may just be because of the white webpage that it bothers me but it's hard to keep track of the edge making the tilt exagerated. Lovely wife in a lovely place I must say though!
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
(K:2141)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/23/2003 5:31:12 PM
I like this angle of the bridge I wish you would have cropped the person out of the bottom as it leads the eye away from the bridge IMHO
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| Photo By: Robert Gaither
(K:34128)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/23/2003 5:29:08 PM
I wish this image were bigger to get a better view I like the blue tone but I can't see the detail well enough to comment further
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| Photo By: Rene Asmussen
(K:138)
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Critique By:
S P (K:952)
5/22/2003 10:43:57 AM
great angle clarity and colors!
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| Photo By: Kara .
(K:337)
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