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Critique By:
Mitra Nademi-Nassari (K:28234)
9/19/2008 11:59:57 PM
What a sad looking face! Why is he crying? Great shot.
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
jahangir Moazen zade (K:75)
8/31/2007 7:15:42 AM
Hi Dear Doyle
With this picture I have intended to show sometimes peopel shouldn't have waited frome somebody or something or... but they couidn't because waiting is beautiful ontological.I don't like that all of my picturs be only very beautiful(if possible) instead I like they be able say a short story,what do you think about my opinion?By the way thanks a lot for all of your views.
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
8/28/2007 3:59:50 PM
Sorry to be so late . . .
I see you have done that . . . but you need to continue to review other photos and be certain to make comments AND ask questions . . . you'll see some of the people you have commented on have returned the favor. Eventually, you'll find some photographers who will check your portfolio and offer advice everytime they see you comment on them!
Try again and this time . . . 12 different countries!! ;P
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
8/28/2007 3:56:31 PM
I agree the title would (could) easily be 317. Intriguing shot and I see you have a suggestion as to the lighting. This is well seen!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
8/28/2007 3:44:47 PM
Nicely done Jahangir . . . "Waiting" makes a good title and the composition is good . . . the telephone seems to be missing . . . let's hope nobody waits for it to ring! :)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
jahangir Moazen zade (K:75)
8/21/2007 6:20:46 PM
Hi Dietmar
Thanks for your attention.
jahangir
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
Dietmar Lange (K:2160)
8/18/2007 11:31:49 AM
I Like it, very.
allworld is in your Pictures.
Merci
dietmar
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
jahangir Moazen zade (K:75)
8/18/2007 8:41:17 AM
Hi Dear Doyle
I recently start photography and i'm not professional but I like it very much.I did my homework and now what should I do?
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
8/17/2007 12:19:44 PM
Teacher? LoL!
Your assignment: Should you choose to accept it!
Ok . . . then . . . for homework find 12 photographs you like here on UF and make comments underneath them about why you like them! Ask any questions you might have too . . . and mention, if it's possible in your opinion, how they might be improved! 12 different photographers! ;)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~~
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
jahangir Moazen zade (K:75)
8/17/2007 9:18:39 AM
Thanks Dear Diego
for your attention.
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Critique By:
Diego Bullita (K:17017)
8/17/2007 9:06:41 AM
hi Jahangir,
optimal composition,
beautiful angle and realization,
regards
diego
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
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Critique By:
jahangir Moazen zade (K:75)
8/17/2007 7:06:23 AM
Hi my teacher,Doyle
Thanks for your recommendation,I agree with you.
Jahangir
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Critique By:
jahangir Moazen zade (K:75)
8/16/2007 9:13:03 AM
Hi Doyle,
Thanks for your recommendation,I agree with you.
Jahangir
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Critique By:
Doyle D. Chastain (K:101119)
8/13/2007 5:56:57 PM
Welcome to UF Jahangir! Look Mate, this is a unique composition and I like the detail . . . just enough to arouse curiosity! I'd be more cautious on the right side crop . . . the glasses being cut is a slight distraction. :)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Critique By:
Dirk Noort (K:9683)
7/13/2007 12:06:52 PM
Very nice shot!
Dirk.
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:23:58 AM
Hi there, Very well seen indeed, good lighting and those nice colours too... Great! The title could easily have been 317 btw. ;-)
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Critique By:
mehrdad tadjdini (K:403)
7/13/2007 10:14:05 AM
Good composion...
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