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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/9/2011 8:06:56 AM
This image is totally in the wrong from the beginning because there is no King Figure in the scene whatsoever. Therefore, I suggest that both of you study the Game of Chess quite a bit closer ...
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| Photo By: Linda Twohig
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/9/2011 3:07:23 AM
Why are you calling me Sunset? He is deceased if you look at his Portfolio or at least what is left of it!
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| Photo By: absynthius .
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/8/2011 8:59:22 AM
Cetin Ozer,
1) Thanks for somewhat respecting my idea.
2) I am NOT your 'Dear Friend' because I have no idea whatsoever who you are!
3) I was NOT speaking about your 'Composition' at all, but rather your overworked framing which kills the image itself.
4) Have you ever heard of the 'KISS' principle? It means ... 'Keep It Simple Stupid'! ;)
Best of Regards,
神 風
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| Photo By: Cetin Ozer
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/8/2011 6:48:16 AM
MUCH BETTER!
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| Photo By: Linda Twohig
(K:2298)
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/8/2011 4:19:50 AM
A most beautiful image almost totally destroyed by competitive framing that is killing a Work of Art. Please keep it simple as per the attached ... Thanks!
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| Photo By: Cetin Ozer
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/7/2011 10:36:18 PM
What a 'Cannibalistic' quote Gabriella that even isn't a critique at all nor suitable for such a beautiful image from such a Great Photographer which you are not at all ...
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| Photo By: absynthius .
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/7/2011 6:43:14 AM
Good Bye Roby & Mia ...
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| Photo By: Roberto Arcari Farinetti
(K:209486)
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/7/2011 6:40:04 AM
What were you two fine ladies talking about?
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| Photo By: Joanna Lamb
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/7/2011 6:20:31 AM
Did you ever know that you were also included in the 'Dedication List' of this one too?
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| Photo By: 神 風
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/6/2011 10:33:04 PM
Congratulations Massimo because you are once again Featured as 'Donor of the Day' on the Front Page!
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| Photo By: Massimo Di Maggio
(K:36342)
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/6/2011 10:30:43 PM
Quite interesting that Gabriella with all her 'Profound Photographic Vision' has not responded when I explained it so perfectly ...
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| Photo By: Turi cg
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/5/2011 1:41:35 PM
I see you took my advise ... Well done!
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| Photo By: Bertrand Zammit
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/5/2011 11:15:41 AM
Keep them coming Salvador and I especially like the colouring in this one, but wish there was a bit more clearance at the top especially the right side if you know what I mean ... Okay?
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| Photo By: Salvador María Lozada
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/5/2011 9:07:48 AM
Not exactly my 'Style' of course, but I do respect your 'About' and I also like the Blue Cast to this image. Thanks for your most recent comment on my work and I do hope the best is yet to come! :)
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| Photo By: Aniko Heart
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 9:00:09 PM
With THREE 'Exclamation Marks' for a 'Title', I am so glad that you are so excited about your own image so please allow me to mark it as a 'Favorite' for you ...
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| Photo By: Radovan Magdalenic
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 8:37:59 PM
'Credit Where Credit Is Due' and keep on carrying that 'Fog Filter' with you because you are doing a great job using it! :))
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| Photo By: Anindya Maity
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 3:58:24 PM
I just simply can't believe that this Guy is eating his 'Friskies Buffet' amongst all these Dogs, Goats, and Miniature Cows without offering them anything, but of course it is a very small can of nourishment for one person only ... :))
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| Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 2:20:49 PM
Photographed at the wrong time of the day, colours are washed out, no significant detail in the foreground, the people have got to go, and the compositon is wrong per the attached (if you don't mind) ...
P.S. Thanks for not leaving worthless comments on my images because that is greatly appreciated!
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| Photo By: Ania Zielińska-Hoşaf
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 12:07:10 PM
I can really relate to this image Pablo being 57 Years Old myself with advanced Spinal Stenosis especially in the Lumbar area causing very painful Sciatica in both legs ...
Just one little question: "Why present a 6 X 6 CM as a 6 X 4.5 CM?"
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| Photo By: Pablo Dylan
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 11:39:26 AM
Just read what I wrote Gabriella ...
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| Photo By: Turi cg
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 11:27:54 AM
SML: I deleted and then resubmitted my most recent image titled "PLACID" so you could keep your four most recent images in sequence ... Okay? I love Ha Long Bay myself and will put up one later because that entire area is somewhat very beautiful isn't it? Keep shooting and/or submitting this Series and this one so far is my Favorite!
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| Photo By: Salvador María Lozada
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 10:25:19 AM
Very 'Dramatic' Chad, but you should have backed off a bit and gotten more of an overall image on all four borders although the IR effect is descent just lacking more visual contact with the entire scene if you know what I mean ...
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| Photo By: Chad Naujoks
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 10:20:57 AM
Dear Member #11018 I didn't know that you have been around here for so long until just now so I would just like to say that this image from almost eight years ago is actually quite nice except that there is no foreground to ground us and overall it just needs someclarification to give it that 'punch' that it needs to really attract our attention ... Yes/No?
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| Photo By: Chad Naujoks
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 10:12:27 AM
Square Format please and the Typo Credits should be reduced and/or eliminated altogether although it very accurately photographed and colorful even with basically only two colors ...
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| Photo By: Bertrand Zammit
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 10:09:01 AM
As promised I have arrived to be your 'Long Lost Audience' for the evening because of a very descent constructive comment on one of my images titled "Land of Vikings" which was deleted out of embarrassment for so few views, comments, and ratings.
This is the first image of yours that I will comment on in chronological sequence as you submitted them starting with the newest first as I scroll through your Portfolio.
She is absolutely cute and has that 'Little rebel' look at least from seven-and-a-half years ago and I like the Black & White submission of her.
Although perhaps, a better location would have been more appealing than have her lean on a Trash Container, but she occupies the space so well that this minor complaint should most likely be voided! :))
Overall ... A great fun shot as you stated in your about ...
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| Photo By: Chad Naujoks
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 1:15:42 AM
Let us study the 'Title' and how it relates to this image first in Spanish and then in English:
Posible es todo aquello que puede ser, que puede existir, que existe o que puede suceder.
Podemos considerar el caso de una, de las dos o las tres o las cuatro cosas juntas o separadas. Entre ellas existen estas relaciones:
Lo que existe, por el mero hecho de existir, es posible y al mismo tiempo es real. Antes de existir era posible; por tanto el posible era (algo); por lo mismo ahora hay, son, posibles muchas cosas aunque en el momento presente no existan.
De entre todas las cosas posibles las hay que pueden existir y las hay que no podrán pasar a la existencia en las condiciones actuales de la existencia posible, aunque teóricamente mantengan su posibilidad. (Pegaso, el caballo con alas, puede existir teóricamente, pero de hecho, en las condiciones actuales, no es posible su existencia). Otras son radicalmente o esencialmente imposibles (el cuadrado redondo).
Si el posible no existía y ahora existe es porque ha sucedido su existencia; lo que supone la existencia previa de las condiciones, las causas, que han producido este suceso en el mundo.
Translation:
Possible is anything that can be, that can exist, exists or can happen.
We consider the case of one, two or three or four things together or separately. Among them are these relationships:
What exists, simply because it exists, is possible and at the same time is real.
Before there was possible and therefore the potential was (something), therefore there are now, are many things possible but at present do not exist. Of all possible things there are that may exist and should not be able to pass into existence under the present conditions of existence possible, even theoretically keep its possibility. (Pegasus, the winged horse, can theoretically exist, but in fact, under present conditions, their existence is not possible). Others are radically and essentially impossible (the round square).
If the potential did not exist and there is now is because it has happened his existence which is the prior existence of the conditions, the causes that have produced this event in the world.
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| Photo By: Turi cg
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 12:47:58 AM
Roaming the skies with a Cell Phone and then converting it to Black & White which was a very good decision ...
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| Photo By: Anindya Maity
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/4/2011 12:45:18 AM
I really like the simplicity of colours and lines Hing, but is the frame really colour-coordinated? Perhaps a dark blue or even purple would be better ... Yes/No?
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| Photo By: Hing Wong
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/3/2011 10:05:09 PM
An even better panoramic especially if viewed at the larger size!
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| Photo By: Roshan Kumara
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Critique By:
神 風 (K:10665)
9/3/2011 10:03:07 PM
So simplistic, but yet a Great Work of Art as presented!
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| Photo By: Roshan Kumara
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