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Critique By:
Todd Miller (K:16464)
3/5/2003 8:52:34 PM
very nice shot. simple, but very effective. i would've shot this scene much differently...i never would have had things so centered, but it looks great this way. nice work!!
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
3/4/2003 3:45:29 PM
I like the soft effect of the trees. Nice image! (c:,'
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Critique By:
GJ Noni (K:992)
3/3/2003 6:32:04 PM
Very nice capture Rena. I like the texture, composition, lines and color.
You have a good eye to see this.
My only question is in the "focus." To me maybe better is flowers were in focus (?) Then again, maybe not. Be intereted in other opinions and what you think?
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Critique By:
Rena Schild (K:2)
3/3/2003 5:45:54 PM
Thank you for good, constructive comments on my photo. I think the contrast adjustment Maggie made probably results in a more aesthetically pleasing photograph, but the photo as is does convey a mood that more closely resembles what I actually saw (if that counts for anything anymore!). Creative minds can differ in opinions when it comes to art; thank you for sharing yours.
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Critique By:
John Myers (K:4308)
3/3/2003 2:08:05 AM
i love the low contrast. it would be a completely different photo if it weren't for the contrast. i'm not sure if i agree with the crop or not...that's for you to decide. i've had days that were so gray...nice capture.
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Critique By:
RAY CHARLES (K:2731)
3/2/2003 6:20:33 PM
Great prospective, nicley composed, I agree with Maggie, the contrast needs adjusting, also the first tree to the right, i would crop the trunk, apart from that great work.
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Critique By:
Elangovan S (K:10675)
3/2/2003 6:18:02 PM
Rena, This is a nicely composed picture. Love the mood in the picture. As Maggie mentions there is not enough contrast going on here... Let me throw my 2cents and see whether it make sense...
Since there is so much of white in the screne the camera got confused and underexposed it. If the shot was taken with +1EV or so... would have been better... IMO.
HTH.
Elangs.
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Critique By:
Deleted User (K:6775)
3/2/2003 4:25:23 PM
Hi Rena...this is a very nice image and well composed but you dont have enough contrast and brightness here. I took your image into photoshop and adjusted the contrast so you could see the difference hope you dont mind. You can control your contrast when exposing your image or at the time of printing...or adjusting your file in Photoshop. Hope you like what i have done to it *smile* Maggie
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Critique By:
Rena Schild (K:2)
2/28/2003 9:19:12 AM
Thanks, Adam, for good, constructive criticism. This photo does have a repetetive pattern, wallpaper-like look to it, although eye-catching because of the color.
To balance it out, I've included a simple, single-flower photo today.
And yes, Deep Blue is the name of a (very smart) chess-playing computer!
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Critique By:
Adam E. J. Squier (K:9803)
2/27/2003 6:05:59 PM
Check. Isn't that the name of a computer? Heh heh. The colors here are fabulous, but there isn't much of a central subject. My eye wants to go all over the place. It doesn't land anywhere. Nor is it led anywhere.
This would be a good backdrop to something. I could see it as a background of a computer screen.
The bottom center flower could be the subject, but it needs to stand out a little more.
Also, you may want to upload a bigger (dimension) file.
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