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Critique By:
Russell Love (K:7006)
4/3/2003 9:27:28 AM
I saw this come up in the random photos. It seems to say something different today.
Later my friend,
Russ
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Critique By:
Russell Love (K:7006)
11/24/2002 7:14:14 AM
Brian,
Good capture of the men who do the job the politicians won't do. From the mud on the boots to the grenades hanging in the chopper, good job!
Later my friend,
Russ
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Critique By:
Michael Jenkins (K:329)
11/14/2002 2:46:26 PM
Good composition, Brian, keeping the horizon low and concentrating on the sky. As for the sky, others have mentioned the bright patch; try a digital colour filter in a new layer in your image editor.
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Critique By:
Greg Summers (K:1115)
11/14/2002 10:23:34 AM
I love these kinds of skies and the placement of the horizon is excellent - the very bright area is intense - my experience tells me to under expose the whole sscen if it is a digital and then slectively restore the colors in the darker areas so there is detail in the very bright areas - and to use an ND graduated filter - since this is film - I think a graduated filter would improve this a lot and my guess is you could still do some work in the bright areas with layers in Photoshop.
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Critique By:
Jim Gamble (K:12164)
11/14/2002 3:03:03 AM
What a GREAT shot and as the old salors would say "Red sky in the morning, salor take warring". Keep up the good work.
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Critique By:
Scott McFadden (K:5663)
11/14/2002 2:24:56 AM
My first thought Whoa.
the impact you've made is remarkable.
I can spot one thing I'd prefer diffrent
like the burn out of the sky area.
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Critique By:
Deleted User (K:6775)
11/13/2002 2:48:40 PM
Hi Brian...*smile* welcome to usefilm. You approached this image very well by placing the sun behind the tree and choosing just the two trees with the bench between them.
I took the liberty of straightening the horizon and cropping out the empty space on the left side and a bit off the top to keep the image roughly the same format size. I wanted to show you that this image could have been cropped in the viewfinder and kept all the elements that makes it a successful image.
I think the cropped version brings the viewers eye to that bench between the trees which i think is an important part of this image. I hope you like what i have done...i am posting it along with this comment. Keep posting...look forward to seeing more of your work...*smile* .. Maggie
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