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Critique By:
Javed Rassi (K:8223)
3/15/2003 11:08:19 AM
Rafael, This is a nice idea but its underexposed, I have corrected it somewhat, hope you dont mind.
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Critique By:
Enzo Molino (K:531)
3/14/2003 9:22:16 PM
Good pose of the bird. Nice colors. I think a slight crop at left can be useful. Image needs to be sharper (maybe a little sharpness correction with your software just before submission).
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Critique By:
Rafael Escalera (K:67)
10/7/2002 10:11:42 PM
Thanks for the comments, now I see the palm and the difference it makes. I took this pic around 6:45 to 7:00 pm here in Hawaii.
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Critique By:
Becky V (K:9699)
10/7/2002 9:16:34 AM
The rich blue in this photo is wonderful and I think there's just enough contrast. However, the tree between the two human figures draws attention away from them. I'd like to see their silhouettes distinct and separated, unless you wanted to illustrate the friendship theme, in which case I think the two silhouettes should be joined on their own accord (i.e., holding hands or something like that). Still, it's a very striking picture. What time of day was it taken?
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Critique By:
Terrence Kent (K:7023)
10/7/2002 5:08:38 AM
melikes
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
10/7/2002 2:29:56 AM
I agree with Sarah. The colors are awesome. I would love to be alone doing the same thing this little guy is doing.
On the constructive side of the picture I would say it may be tilted by about .25% to the left of the picture?
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Critique By:
Sarah Needham (K:2482)
10/1/2002 12:48:36 AM
Good image. I like the combination of the colours and the lonely pose of your little boy.
Sarah
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