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Critique By:
Keith Williams (K:51)
11/17/2002 11:05:51 PM
Alex, maybe try to get the lighting so that you have more reflection off the coins - add a little "spark".
I'd personally prefer the framing to have the subjects up and top the right.
Hey, here's a thought, could have called it "coinversation" instead of "discussion"
I did a similar few shots of a British penny or 5 pence (I forget) on a wooden surface - could post it somewhere if you'd like (post a comment in reply if you'd like to see it)
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| Photo By: Alex Ruiz
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Critique By:
Keith Williams (K:51)
11/16/2002 10:57:32 AM
Kim, I'd personally prefer slightly different lighting. Maybe from above front right?
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| Photo By: Kim Barke
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Critique By:
Keith Williams (K:51)
11/16/2002 10:23:15 AM
Don't know Koen. I like the centre composition of the buckles. The positioning and texture of the yellow belts does the rest.
Jackie, maybe a slightly different hue of blue background or a totally different background colour may make a positive change?
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| Photo By: Jackie Card
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Critique By:
Keith Williams (K:51)
11/16/2002 10:18:46 AM
I think the advice in the 1st two comments is good, but, getting back to the shot: the composition could be improved by not using the full, centre framing. Sharpness would help. Is the fuzziness intentional, from handholding or from resaving as low quality JPG?
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| Photo By: Lee Horn
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Critique By:
Keith Williams (K:51)
11/16/2002 10:14:48 AM
The perspective you chose is spot on! Great colors and sharpness make this a standout shot.
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
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Critique By:
Keith Williams (K:51)
11/16/2002 10:11:45 AM
I agree with Lee. Without detracting from this shot, how about trying to get the lines of perspective to converge a little more?
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