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Critique By:
ian (K:354)
3/17/2002 11:59:46 PM
when i first looked at this photo, i didnt know what i was looking at. i thought it was a refelction shot. then i looked again and i realized it was a part of a pine tree(?) silhouetted against the sun. is taht right? well, anyways...what i would do is leave out the blurry foreground(bottom right) and the branch (top left). to me they distract from the main subject, the pine thingy majiggy. i think it wouldve been nicer with the silhouette in a backdrop of blue sea
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Critique By:
dennis fowler (K:58)
2/9/2002 5:04:53 AM
jasper,
Nice shot, you caught an intresting part of the action, tightly composed, Ive checked out your other work some nice work,hope to see more.
Dennis Fowler
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Critique By:
Jasper Davis (K:165)
2/7/2002 1:10:18 PM
Debbie, thank you for the sugeestions. I will try it and in other photo as well. Yes, those are his real hands. The fingers kind of reminds me of the feather tips on a bird's out sretched wings.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
2/7/2002 3:11:45 AM
I love taking pictures of people to Jasper. His hands look kinda different? Are they really his hands? I don't know why they look well I just don't know?...
I see a few things I would clone out. The spot on his jacket. I know that's probably part of his jacket such as a button or something but it distracts me. Also there are a few extra whitish looking spots in the grass and sidewalk that are distracting. Also would crop the extra whatever that is in the bottom right corner.
Crop and clone...Hope you're not opposed to these features?
Other than that this is such a "fun" image. I love the composition of the "/" you captured. Hope to see you post more.
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