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Rawabi Al-Nuaimi
{K:15659} 12/1/2003
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yeah i agree with the crop.. the picture is beautiful.. i loved the angle and composition.. try playing around with PS... add colors to the clouds for more dramatic effect... but without colors it's beautiful as well..
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Halid Izzet
{K:373} 5/13/2002
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Thanks Simon,
You've convinced me ! I think your version is stronger.
I'll get to croppong the original !
Thanks
Halid
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Simon Scott
{K:20} 5/11/2002
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I also agree, that the crop coud be improved. Here is my humble suggestion.
Also feel like the image is a little soft, perhaps the scan as you mentioned?
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Halid Izzet
{K:373} 4/16/2002
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Thanks for the comment Howard.
In fact from the moment I took the picture to the final printing, I deliberately left the large foreground of black in. I felt that it made for a more interesting cmposition.
Using the top third of the image for the subject seemed right , and with the girls looking in opposite directions, the centre seemed correct too. I did not want to cut short one of the persons lines of vision as I think it would weaken the image.
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Howard M. Parsons
{K:3496} 4/15/2002
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I can feel the tension between the two figures and the backlit silhouette makes if more effective. I wonder, however if the image would be stronger if most of the black area at the bottom were cropped out - I kept holding up my hand to block it out, but am undecided whether or not it's better that way.
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