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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/17/2003 4:37:44 PM
This is an outstanding capture from a true artist! It gets my EC choice!! Amazing Rene!!
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| Photo By: Rene Asmussen
(K:138)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/16/2003 8:48:23 PM
You have two parts to this in my opinion. The model is stunning, and you have indeed captured her perfectly. The soft focus works unbelievably well. Colors are superb as also. However, the other side to this is the background. To me, it just does not quite work like it should. The falls are actually too hot in spots (abover her arm is the most obvious) and the foliage is too dark, or barely discernable. Over-all, it is still excellent simply because of the way that you have captured this beautiful girl.
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/16/2003 3:41:15 PM
Hi Jim, the composition is excellent here! However, as you can tell the quality of the images is still poor in my opinion. Over-sharpened, yet still blurry. Interestng how video is getting closer though, but still a ways away. No offense at all mt fellow photographer, but for Hayri to praise this is absurd. The 7 ratings is evidence of some other "hidden" agendas. I will not even rate it. I cannot speak spanish so no idea what Luis said. I do appreciate what you are trying to accomplish however...just not there yet! All the best, Vince
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Photo By: Jim F
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/14/2003 3:02:56 PM
While I love the lighting here Hayri, I am not so sure that the composition flows as well. Water is a nice touch, sky looks good and great colors as well. But I just do not quite see them working together harmoniously in this case. Still a very striking image!
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| Photo By: Hayri CALISKAN
(K:16195)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/14/2003 2:34:09 PM
Lighting is very good, and the jewelry is a nice element here. But it is her pose and the cropping that is truly excellent in my opinion. Excellent!
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| Photo By: emil schildt
(K:427)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/10/2003 10:31:22 PM
So he thinks he is a cat does he?? You should have a heart to heart if you really love him, rather than feed this terrible sickness by shooting portraits of him in a tree!! Perhaps some stick in the water tricks might help....if it's not too late! Picture is nice by the way, if one can look past the obvious psychological issues here. How you been by the way Kim??
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| Photo By: Kim Culbert
(K:37070)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/10/2003 6:27:15 PM
Well composed here with excellent colors. The cloning tool would be a great idea for the hanging things....they really are simply too distracting. Otherwise very well done!
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| Photo By: Sompote Youwai
(K:7)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/10/2003 4:03:20 PM
Excellent clarity and nice contrast of color between the greens and brown!
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| Photo By: Vitor Azinheira
(K:2338)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/10/2003 12:23:41 PM
I like the silhouette of a man hard at work in a beautiful setting. The colors, especially in the foreground are excellent. I would just suggest making it just a bit little darker here, to really give this a bit more mood or ambiance...especially in the sky. The birds are a great touch. Very nice!
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| Photo By: T Glow
(K:14955)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
5/4/2003 10:21:36 PM
Outstanding capture....wonderful colors. This is great photography!
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| Photo By: Brian Steele
(K:620)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/27/2003 11:00:34 AM
A beautiful capture indeed. I wonder how this would look if the suns light was on the entire scene. Sometimes a little shadow or contrast can help, but here I'm not so sure. Still, a very nice photograph!
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| Photo By: Jean-Noël Fargier
(K:258)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/27/2003 10:54:56 AM
Nice reflection of the sky here. Might not be a bad idea to clone out some of the poles.
Sorry about deleting your comment on my flower shot. I did not like the border color after loading. Thanks anyway.
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| Photo By: Shai Ritblatt
(K:3755)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/20/2003 8:06:07 PM
Beautiful colors and nicely framed. Well done!
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| Photo By: Nabil Majid
(K:2073)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/17/2003 5:54:44 PM
A different world indeed!! Well seen and captured.
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| Photo By: Aiman Nassar
(K:11961)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/14/2003 11:26:54 PM
I too think it looks like a painting. However, I just do not see this as an excellent photograph. For one it really is not sharp enough in my opinion. If this is the look you wanted then that may help some, but it still does not honestly have enough to be considered a good photograph. Painting yes, photograph no. I also see the upper portion as a bit too bright...washed out you might even say. The foreground and reflection is also cluttered....I am having a hard time making out any details. I know that I am obviously in the minority here and certainly respect all other very positive comments. I just personally do not see it the same way. Sorry. Nice colors though, thats for sure.
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| Photo By: kita mcintosh
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/3/2003 11:29:46 AM
Interesting shapes and nice colors. I would put this under abstracts...very unusual for a sunset. Neat shot!
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| Photo By: Cary Shaffer
(K:9269)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/3/2003 11:26:50 AM
A nice capture here. I too like how the clouds reflect in the water. The framing works well in my opinion...gives this a nostalgic appearance. I would sharpen this some, is a bit soft. Nice job.
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| Photo By: Amy Drake
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/3/2003 11:26:37 AM
TA nice capture here. I too like how the clouds reflect in the water. The framing works well in my opinion...gives this a nostalgic appearance. I would sharpen this some, is a bit soft. Nice job.
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| Photo By: Amy Drake
(K:996)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
4/2/2003 12:35:32 AM
Simply stated...WOW! Outstanding capture.
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| Photo By: Przemyslaw Piwowar
(K:136)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/27/2003 6:55:13 AM
Nicely composed and great colors. It looks just a bit soft on my screen, but still a very nice capture. (8
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| Photo By: Dawn Chadwick
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/27/2003 6:53:00 AM
Great capture jack. The B&W works surprisingly well here! I like the faster shutter as well. Nice one. (8
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| Photo By: Jack Miller
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/26/2003 12:44:11 AM
Don't I know this place...a beautiful capture indeed!!
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| Photo By: Gregory McKnight
(K:543)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 8:08:50 PM
You have a very nice portfolio John. I like the depth of field with this image, the colors and the simplistic effect. Very well done. (8
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| Photo By: John Barclay
(K:3650)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 6:25:07 PM
Great shot, with excellent depth to capture the second boat. Super camera I must say as well.
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 5:30:21 PM
Very intimate and excellent details. I would back up just a bit to catch a bit more of her hair and not get sooooo close. Just a personal choice I guess, but still very well done!
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| Photo By: Javed Rassi
(K:8223)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 4:02:02 PM
Outstanding colors, and very nicely composed. I would highly suggest putting some black border around it to fully bring out those colors even more as attached. Nice. (9
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| Photo By: Karen Johnson
(K:2951)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 3:55:21 PM
Beautifuly composed and a nice mood here. I agree with adding some brightness...perhaps a point of backlight or two might do it. Well captured. (8
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| Photo By: Ingrid Mathews
(K:7277)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 3:52:38 PM
Beautiful tones for sure. If you cloned out the telephone lines, it would be even nicer in my opinion. Still, well seen and captured.
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| Photo By: Lilywhite Lilith
(K:1809)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/24/2003 3:48:37 PM
A very interesting and colorful looking fellow. Doubt that you would want to bring him to your house for a meal though!
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| Photo By: Clara Showalter
(K:663)
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
3/20/2003 2:34:18 PM
I like this Kim. It has real character, almost an 1800s look and feel (all but the dog's collar). Sky is a bit hot, but this still works fine in my opinion.
Now, if you put a couple of goats in there instead.......
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| Photo By: Kim Culbert
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